I wrote this in school =) enjoy!!! I feel so timeless I feel so righteous No time and space The world erased Problems fly by My world am I Be one with me I am so free My flawless soul My heart controlled the mind so blissfull All strories told There are no secrets No thought controll Mary jane on my side Make me feel alright.
Nice as as a poem, but bitchin as song lyrics man. Learn to play guitar or piano or osmehting, and write osme music to go with it .
Thanks for the compliment... im playing the guitar already though. im still tryin to convert this to a song =)
that poem is pretty sweet, but in the end instead of "Mary jane on my side Make me feel alright." it should maybe say "Mary jane in my sight Make me feel alright." thats not a big difference, just my 2cents