What's up peoples. My good friend Travis just released a new song a few days ago. It's basically on some straight up lyrical slaughter. Dope beat. I think he did a great job.. he can probably work on one or two things but I LOVE the song. [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wPyq2GL7IPE]Muddaz - Mud Slinger(lyrics) - YouTube[/ame] Let me know what you guys think. Enjoy!
Oh yea... the whole thing is self-produced and mastered as well. (I helped a little lol) Anyone give it a listen? Opinions? Feedback? It's all much appreciated. Thanks for checking out. Peace
dude he needs work in the meaning of what he spits listen to stuff like nas and emmortal technique man; like story telling. Not just putting words together that rhyme. and he need to feel what he is saying i wasn't convinced, almost sounded monotone thruout the whole song. dont take these as insults or as rude comments, but just things to help you improve. im not saying you cant rap but just things to work on
Word up man, no I don't take it as rude or insults at all. It's perfect honest constructive criticism. I appreciate that. It's actually not me it's my buddy rapping. But thanks for the input. That's the type of thing you need to hear as a developing artist to improve. So it's all good. He definitely has a much more meaningful side to his lyrics too. This is just a hardcore, being lyrical-for-lyricism's sake type song. But he definitely has a very deep, conscious, meaningful side to his music as well. http://soundcloud.com/basic-sound/quantum Another beat he produced... he's the second verse and going back and forth on the first. Just another aspect. That's a really good point u make though. That's the type of stuff we wonder as artists - what do people prefer? Do they enjoy flow/lyricism for its own sake or do they prefer meaning every time? Good to hear an honest opinion, thanks.
wow that actually sounds professional. but yeah it seems like he wants to say something really lyrical but he connects a bunch of meaningless lines. it sounds really good though
Thanks man glad you like it. It does sound pretty professional. Keep in mind too guys that he made this beat, produced it and recorded and mixed it all himself. So he's not just rapping on this. He's the entire sound, the whole energy. The beat and flow is my favorite part tbh lol.. I enjoy it a lot on that level alone Its kind of funny that he chose to go with a song like this for his first single. I know him very well. he comes off as aggressive and all of that on this song, but that's just one side of him. In real life he's the most far from aggressive dude you'll ever meet lol. He has many different styles.. this is just his get raw be clever and make a dope flow style. For what it is I think it's sick. Some people prefer more meaningful lyrics and don't dig the aggressive battle-type lyrrical shit and I get that for sure. He also makes a lot of more conscious, relatable and meaningful songs as well. just likes to keep a good balance. i'm the same way. but for what this song is, i love it. especially the beat. the song kind of grows on you - to me it did anyway. Thanks for the feedback guys - peace
Hey yall.. here is some more of my homie Travis. If you want to hear him in a more natural tone... check out this freestyles. Snimmpy the White Man mixdown1 by The Vapor MC on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free ^He's mostly being goofy with his voice here, but he still kills it (freestyle) Noxious mix1 by The Vapor MC on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free ^ His verse on here is nasty. We recorded this probably about 2 years ago... just doing a practice of listening to a beat and writing a verse in 10 mins. These are 10 min verses... I think his is tight as shit (he's the first one) Broken Promise Freestyle [Travis] by ClearLight on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free ^ Another freestyle.. with a tight DBZ reference thrown in there Figured I'd bump the thread for some more feedback. Thanks 4 listening if you do... peace
I dig it, he just needs to work on the lyrics making more sense and "story telling" like others have said. The flow and beat is nice though. The start to the chorus if pretty cool too
Thanks for the feedback bro! He definitely has some deeper and more meaningful lyrics. Check out this song from our group Basic... you can catch the lyrics there too. His artist name is Muddaz. Quantum | Basic But he is just a naturally dope lyrcist. Check these lyrics for this song I'm about to post below.. Noxious. We did a MC drill where we write the best verse we can in 10 minutes. Just straight up forcing yourself to commit and let it loose. Noxious mix1 by The Vapor MC on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free His lyrics: Muddaz - Noxious Verse 1 Jeronomo! Leaping off a cliff high off a spliff Get a drift I'm a cannonball making all natural Juice with emcees like Danimals Catapult across the galaxy, break ya dreams and their Fallacies, Logically you can't fuck with this I walk above the dark abyss, while yall lost in the Mist of the master, I'm the farmer you're the Cows in the pastuer, next to a pastor When I speak pull ya TONGUE, chew ya CUD little PUNK, I'm the JUDGE and I find you GUILTY Pitiful and FILTHY, might as a well put a GUN to your head and say by to your SON Your style is finished diminished, worth less than SEWAGE I spit TOXIC FLUID to get that ass beat To a pulp, burn off your eyelids from the NOXIOUS GAS, yes I whoop that ASS! Fucking SICK ass verse to write in 10 minutes
