Untitled Poem

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by KILLBUSH, Oct 13, 2004.

  1. i wrote this when i was in 9th grade. i used to be all into gothic type shit, now im not and glad of it, but i wrote a lot of songs and what not and heres one i kept. tell me what u think...



    black of night
    meaningless
    no more light
    meaningless

    i am clear
    i am dark
    i am fear
    i embark
    this dark quest
    to fill me
    with my request

    i am here
    to kill you
    physically
    i am here
    to break you
    mentally

    taste of death
    meaningless
    your last breathe
    meaningless
     
  2. its cruel

    its searching for emotion but finding none it resorts to rage.
     
  3. lol, wow you must be into poetry i assume? well thnx, i guess?:confused:
     
  4. that's a compliment
     

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