"The Aroma Of Stale Cigarrettes"

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by iDA<3 bbY, Jan 14, 2010.

  1. Thirteen years of silent fears
    my story unutterable
    My brazeness came out to speak upon you
    you act nobly though your not
    your haughty personality rubs off
    it rained and your colors bleed thru
    therefore your not really you
    You took a prosporous man and made him poor
    Now he forgot to feed his four
    I feel the indifference of your sneer
    Forever more no more fears
    You presume this man
    Took his hand
    and stole the life right out of him
    He breaths no more
    my heart is torn
    He's never home
    He would never know
    who his children really are



    -ida mae v.
     
  2. Yes! this was amazing, do you have any more?
     
  3. wow realy amazing! i realy liked the line where you were talking about how when it rains u can see through there fore its not realy you. very creative! post more!
     

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