[ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RwBpZNT9XrM]dom philly- Shady 2.0 Cypher - Instrumental - YouTube[/ame] arms too heavy i reckon I need a lighter glock left the circle for the nicer crops in the writers block paid the piper, type of cypher to knife ya wife a lot im at the end of my line the sign of a hyphen stopped percussions bustin no one to trust, find an accomplice you all gassed up like accomplished orthadontists writin bills like congress, they the bomb shit, we astonished the calmness upon us like concious suicidal pirahnas, writin down drunk, rough draft like kiper spittin in a crossfire cyphers in a chrysler i am gettin hyper, im changin shit up like a diaper, ya girl spreadin wide like ima wipe her not gonna wife her but when it waynes it pours like riker, yall bite harder than a viper you spit softer than a hiker with no fluids yall singin on the bridge bitch I flow through it a crack baby is your only shot at a possible dope delievery, rollin thru the hospital, it'll be your only spot to push ill shit literally, see you couldn't find a bill inside of hillary you wouldn't be sicker spittin amongst six woman that for every whack line would make you drink liquor and tell the nine to turn around to see a six figure think bigger, grab a hoe and tell her to dig quicker they told me to branch out, i wanted to stick wit her til i saw how she rolls, it was the bigger picture i was lookn at readin cookin crack for dummies now im lookin like an ass, bookin raps for money
damn dude u killed that shit. I just listened to it once and i didn't read the lyrics as i listened but anyways i noticed it had some parts with some rediculous rhyme schemes. Alot of multi syllable rhymes. I also noticed a couple crazy metaphors. Keep it up man.
np man. Hey if you ever wanna spit over one of my beats let me know. They are a much different style though than that beat www.soundclick.com/dylanbeatz
thanks..i don't usually use those type of beats (the one I used in this thread), I'm into more 9th wonder/J dilla/Black Milk etc. type shit...I'ma give your beats a look