Rape

This ones pretty strong I wrote it not too long ago.

You look very well
It happends at a quarter to twelve
You were locked in an unforgiving cell
Beaten by hope and luxury
You couldn't of touched me
By the faith of a new dawn
Everything went so wrong
Beaten to misery and sorrow
You were up all night
Thinking everything would be alright tomorrow
Your eyes so strong with a long stare
Into the emptiness of hopefulness
Raped and deprived
I finally arrived
Dead by suicide

If you don't get it, a girl was raped and she stayed up all night until dawn where she couldn't live with herself anymore when someone arrives to save her she is already dead.

Please rate it guys.
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Heres a second I did, this time it's about a young boy who had no idea his mom adopted him, and later finds out at the worst time.

One heard the cries
Of the mistrusting lies
Untrustworthy, misleading both at a tie
One to be hurt
Was the one who played
How could he believe such dirt.
Everyday since birth
Not a thing changed
His mother continuingly aged
As she layed in her bed
Half live, half dead
She told him the truth that played with his head
You're a disgrace, I'm not your mother, I rather be dead.
But I love you his mother said
One to be dead, Four word to be said
You are my hero her soul says
Off her bed, into the dirt
She was buried with guilt and hurt

 

Thanks man, I cannot begin to tell you how much I hate rape, if I ever seen it happening no matter what girl it is, what they look like, I will kill the guy. I'm really sorry about your ex, I don't know what I would do if something like that happened to me, but I know for a fact I would build up so much anger to do anything in my power to make that man suffer. I did try to warn people that the poem was strong in the first line. Anyone who is offended I am truly sorry.

 

I was thinking of putting death instead of dead, but I liked dead better, i don't know why.