Rap Battle Tournament Round 1: Sparkin Vs. Cberry8

Discussion in 'Music genres, Bands and Artists' started by cberry8, Feb 2, 2011.

  1. #1 cberry8, Feb 2, 2011
    Last edited by a moderator: Feb 4, 2011
    Voting has expired, Sparkin wins with a count of 8-3


    Sparkin
    It looks so easy when I 'break clowns', betta get 'braced now',
    cuz my fire arms are like an "islamic church", they be layin
    bitches 'face down', You gunna be quick to get 'erased now'
    because your shit is whack.. I was sittin back, 'peepin ya stuff',
    Its obvious you always "skip the second draft", I guess he likes
    'keepin it rough', these shots will have you 'leakin sum blood',
    Lines so "infectious" the "disease is lifelong" like catching
    'stds from a slut', whos cberry? I'm about to 'address this lame',
    Uppercuts will have him "catching air" jus like 'jessy james'
    Its so easy to 'flex my game', straight destroy cats and
    dress the floor with their 'messy brains'!, He thinks hes the
    'hottest rhymer', hes just a 'compromiser', i'm 'droppin fire',
    Take your bitch and 'occupy her', she calls me "the bomb",
    just like 'rob oppenheimer'!! You know that spark will fill him up
    with nothin 'less than a clip', 'mess up his lips', cuz you couldnt
    "smash bars" if you were "hittin the club" and 'wreckin ya whip'!


     
  2. checkin in sparkin, let's get it goin
     
  3. Check.. good luck again man lets make it a good one.

    I was a stoned dumbass and forgot to save my verse before I shutdown my computer, so I have to type another one... :(

    If you could drop first it would be appreciated.
     
  4. hahaha word, will do! good luck!!

    I'mma set this fire ablaze and send this Sparkin man walkin
    It ain't this often I'm boxin with someone who requires Klonopin
    It's this on again off again relationship, makin love to my cadence grip
    Should learn to grip reality before your battle licks starts its fits
    Whinin and cryin tryin to rip it with this multi-syllabic rhymin
    But he's gotta do with hyphens, like we can't connect dots when he's typin
    And even though I dropped first, I could see that shit comin
    Add quotations to mutilations, he thinks he stuns with his cunning
    When he did his own thumping, eyes bulging, thoughts jumping
    Wondering if I'll stuff him, a turkey, feedin with my own verbal thrusting
    Must have been his arrogance but my seventh sense, sensin it's true
    Like I'm One Flew Over The Cuckoo's Nest, but man, I think you're a few
    Continue testin your youth, proof that yes, indeed, it's a vet's game
    No questions remain when my winds never calm, weather's the same
    Hurricane gusts spits the dust into your eyes, clouding your vision
    Good luck sparkin that lighter, no fire when my flood gates have risen
     
  5. It looks so easy when I 'break clowns', betta get 'braced now',
    cuz my fire arms are like an "islamic church", they be layin
    bitches 'face down', You gunna be quick to get 'erased now'
    because your shit is whack.. I was sittin back, 'peepin ya stuff',
    Its obvious you always "skip the second draft", I guess he likes
    'keepin it rough', these shots will have you 'leakin sum blood',
    Lines so "infectious" the "disease is lifelong" like catching
    'stds from a slut', whos cberry? I'm about to 'address this lame',
    Uppercuts will have him "catching air" jus like 'jessy james'
    Its so easy to 'flex my game', straight destroy cats and
    dress the floor with their 'messy brains'!, He thinks hes the
    'hottest rhymer', hes just a 'compromiser', i'm 'droppin fire',
    Take your bitch and 'occupy her', she calls me "the bomb",
    just like 'rob oppenheimer'!! You know that spark will fill him up
    with nothin 'less than a clip', 'mess up his lips', cuz you couldnt
    "smash bars" if you were "hittin the club" and 'wreckin ya whip'!


    Explanations for the slow people lol
    Obviously you lay down to pray when you're in an islamic church
    Jessy james is a dare devil, he has his own show on spike tv
    robert oppenheimer was one of the dudes who founded 'the bomb'


    Alright... lets get the votes rollin in..
     
  6. word, starting voting guys! I'm gonna add the verses to the OP just so people don't edit (not against you Sparkin, I trust you, but some of the other people I don't know)

    VOTE VOTE VOTE!!!
     
  7. cberry was tight with the predictions on style, but sparks took it home with the punches and flow

    sparks
     
  8. hahah yo sparkin, you killed one of my lines without your typical use of hyphens between your multi's :p
     

  9. I grew out of that style when someone told me it looked gay lol.

    Good verse bro, should be a close one.
     
  10. ummm sparkin had some good punches, so ill give it to him, sorry cberry :eek:
     
  11. I think cberry took it with the imagery at the end, shits dope.
     
  12. Had to read Cberrys twice cause i couldnt quite catch the flow....but i got it and after comparing the two i'd have to give it to Sparkin..... cberrys was good but sparkin i beleive came harder with punches and flow like dreadlocker had mentioned.... and his last line was pretty sick imo


    So my vote goes to SPARKIN... sorry Berry
     
  13. Good battle def close. Thought it was a easy win for sparking when I just read it but after actually spitting them both berries flow was actually pretty dope and he had more original concepts behind the punches. If that hyphen personal had come through woulda been berry but I'm goin with sparkin.
    Damn I wish I had got in this thing just haunt been around here lately.
     
  14. Wait yo.... Sparkin did hyphen his shit tho didnt he?... looks like he did to me?.... i thought c berry almost had him with that line.
     
  15. Was a good one, but my vote goes to Sparkin'
     
  16. Nah this-is-a-hyphen. But damn berry gotta say the imagery with the flood gates was fuckin NICE.
     

  17. I did do it in the last rap battle tourney but that was months ago... Like I said before I grew outta hyphoning my shit.

    I thought it helped string together the multies but it just made the verse look stupid.
     
  18. thanks man, I think the fact that I got to the finals last time was fluke. I'm not much of a battle rapper.

    appreciate everyone apologizing not voting for me though, at least I know I'm doing something right haha :p
     
  19. this was close but ima give it to cberry. both had nice flow but sparkin's rap needed an explanation..if it wasn't there many people would of been left clueless. i must be slow
     

  20. People use references, can't hold it against them.

    You need to know what I'm talking about to understand the line. I know many people dont know who robert oppenheimer is, but jesse james is pretty well known.

    Berry's needed no explanation because he has a different style, no offense but don't vote if you don't understand the lines, thats what I put the explanations there for.
     

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