Quick song verse I wrote right after I got high. Comments appreciated!

Discussion in 'General' started by Mellumz, Aug 31, 2009.

  1. So as of my last high about 30 minutes ago I decided to take up songwriting. This is the very first my efforts have yielded. I don't know if its just me and I'm high but I think it sounds pretty badass so far, anyone else agree? Talking about the content and rhyming not the literal meaning yet.

    I fast forward the day, time always slipping away
    Until night, time slows as thoughts fly while I lay
    Opportunities and ideas, realizations and implications,
    Plans to succeed, but nothin, no initiation
    Trapped myself in this permanently mindset of stonification
     

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