[ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BsskOLIBp7w]YouTube - October 7th (Lyrics in description)[/ame] Best with headphones peeps... LYRICS: still throwed, i been doin me you wanna see whats up,then come around and see we start with plan b to get ahead of the police bitch please, me and tommy never switch seats duckin moms, pops, and cops with ease im in the passenger actin like an animal hes in the drivers handlin the manual transmisson, the blunts always handswitchin' no need to ask me if im throwed, cause i am bitches roll alot of swishers, my fingers got blisters the stash ass so fat, i can hardly lift 'er i can hardly picture not bein me even with 20/20 you are not seein me only out at night, chillin in the shadows monopolize the rap game, do not pass go whoa, back up, bout blow track the up prolly rappin slow cause i double stack cups no fussin no fightin got the tussin over sprite and once i get to sippin, then i get to writin still throwed, i been doin me you wanna see whats up,then come around and see we start with plan b to get ahead of the police all right, I can do it all night raw/tight rap lines getcha flatlined nap time tombstone flow naw ya dont know you get smoked like a roach when im broke bro as far as this goes, raps a hobby but you still get cut, my hands a hatchet, AXE somebody damn, im doper than a gram aint no one as throwed as i am still throwed, i been doin me you wanna see whats up,then come around and see we start with plan b to get ahead of the police
haha i put that in there on purpose...i like that shit . Oh well, different strokes for different...people?
I can see that voice working if you dont leave that little bit of a space in between words, see devin the dude, also the beat doesnt suit your voice, a little bit less kick and i dunno another sample would improve but ey not too shabby man
keep the comments comin...someone is bound to like it... Ive never had much love/luck on GC anyway, these people seem to be more wiz khalifa type shit and whatnot and I cant stand that dude, but i appreciate the comments guys, keep em comin
Alright man lets put all the nit pickin aside from these guys above me.. that is a song you should be proud of lol I was sittin here by myself jammin to it and you had some sick lines... if I had to criticize one thing it would be doing a version without the little kid voice (just to test it out, i liked it in this version too) or there were a couple of times where one or two more syllables in a line would have made you kill that beat but you just went with the simple line instead... either way... I need to download this!!! good job!
Personally, I'm diggin' it, man That doubled up, two octave voice in the background didn't necessarily bother me, but it did kind of sneak up on me, and not necessarily in the good way. But you had some dope rhymes and some mean nasty lines, so you definitely score high on my charts. Your syncopation needs to pick up just a little bit since you almost lost me in the first four lines, but you could also mess with the beat maybe a little bit and still keep the same vocal track. Overall, I'd say this is a solid B-, bro. Good track
thanks for the comments peeps, I got the two-octave voice thingy idea from a z-ro song i thought sounded SOO ill...it was called Letz Ride...I figured id try it out, I like how it turned out tho, kinda gives it a scratchy feel if that makes any sense
Maybe chop some samples up in the back? Or you could look into some glitch stuff and try to incorporate it into your beat (which I think would be sick as fuck).