I made a track for youtube. Please take a listen, and enjoy. Rate or leave a comment if you like [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HtR71zye6uk]YouTube - The F word[/ame]
I like it. Think you need to do a mix it down again. Sounds like the vocals had a lot of compression and the highs were completely smashed in the mixdown. You might be able to fix that by lowering the vocals, the rest of the track as well and compressing the entire track on the main bus.