need quick feedback

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by kalayyy7, Dec 19, 2008.

  1. #1 kalayyy7, Dec 19, 2008
    Last edited by a moderator: Dec 22, 2008
    poem.
     
  2. #2 GreenGoblin7, Dec 20, 2008
    Its def a really good poem, i didn't nessecarily see it in the way you were going for but i can understand your interpretation. Either way it was a really cool poem
     
  3. #3 McLovin23_x2, Dec 20, 2008
    wow.
    shits as deep as a trench.
    i like it.
     
  4. #4 kalayyy7, Dec 21, 2008
    :Dthanks!
     
  5. #5 acekilla89, Dec 21, 2008
    that was really good...
     
  6. #6 Per Waui, Dec 21, 2008
    pretty good, although for some reason "SO beautiful So Pure" kinda puts me off
     
  7. #7 kalayyy7, Dec 21, 2008
    its funny--i dont really like that either. i still havent given it to her because of that part.
    any advice on what i could say instead?
     

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