Few of my bros were blazing and we decided to do one of our first freestyles, I thought we were pretty good, so we made a crew, not sure if I thought this cause we were high, but we're makin a mix tape right away, can anyone tell me if these rhymes are sick at all, I was messin around stoned last night. "Ann what If I were to paint these walls red, splatter with brains Or hang you by a chain, when you dead, sit you out in thah rain, Or tie you up to the tracks of a train, again! I could fuck your shit up, end it right here Snip off your ear, nn cheer while you scream in fear, Ann dissapear, 2 years later, re-appear, Stab you in thah gut shove you down a garbage chute, then shoot! Im crazy like patrick swayze, Do some dirty dancin wit ya mother, kill ya brother, Your dad walks up, an shoot him in tha head, mother fuckers dead, Some bitches call me twisted, but *****z assisted, ann I insisted! Im Psycho like Geico, Take your money ann peace, Kill all tha Police, Ann still drop another sick release! Snitches get stitches, stab em throw em in the ditches Got the police chasin me, on parole, just stole another patrole car Drove it to the bar, got another 40 ounce, ann its time tah bounce ann buy another ounce. Im so dope, better hope you dont get hung by the devils tongue, Cause mother fucker, IM THE DEVILS SON! Watch as I reach for my maw fuckin gun, Fuck it, Im down for a fast one Before I blast a round nn shove you 6 feet in thah ground, It was bound to happen, with a bitch like you tryinna clown around, So spin around, While I blast a round, shoot ya in the knee Hurt so bad, leave you 10 miles, screamin out for yah dad Just seen yoh ass in a MISSING newspaper AD, Neva shouldda fucked with a 3O6Kiing, you tried to swing, now yah feel tha sting, Now peace tha fuck out, while I pawn your dead moms wedding ring! Cause I'm paid, cause im made gettin laid! I cant stand all these bitches breathin down my neck. So fly, got a private-eye in tha sky, I see you mother fuckers, you can run but you sure ass hell can not hide! Did you hear about your bro donny? Shot him in tha side, he died, North Side-Take pride, all you mother fuckers world wide, You all know Da3O6Kiingz, We so fuckin fly, BITCHES, WE GOT WINGS! My shit so popular, like, Lord a dah rings, When I spit a rhyme, so Hot, you fuckin bet it stings, My shit like Mohammed Ali, cause bitch, yah best believe, I fly like a butterfly and sting like a bee Three mother fuckers, tied up to a tree, Shoot out there knees, Look whos on another killing spree! You better watch out, Im fuckin ya motha, My blood brother BIG B, burnin down tha entire family tree! High-speed chase on the Freeway, Cause its the G-Way I may have shot thah fuckin sherrif, but I stabbed the fucking deputy So come on you fuckin thugs, lets check it what cha got, Causee if yah shit aint hot, best believe, you'll get shot, aint scared a' no S.W.A.T even if I got caught, you still gonn' rot in thah same fuckin spot. Mother fuckers, wanna fuck around, fine bitch, get shot When I say im goin for a walk, you betta get the cops here, cause just for fun Ill kill a fuckin queer Cause this is the final fronteir, aint gonna be sencere, Ittl be severe, rip off your fuckin ear, Ide like to welcome y'all to thah acemane, series premiere. up here, I can sense your motha fuckin fear! ...any volunteers?!" Opinions please! Willing to take critisism, the Rap game is a lot different from my hood to yours probablly. xD
Open up your heart, what do you feel Open up your heart, what do you feel is real The big bang may be a million years away But I can't think of a better time to say World, hold on Instead of messing with our future, open up inside World, hold on Wonder you will have to answer to the children of the sky Children of the sky Children of the sky Look inside, youll find a deeper love The kind that only comes from high above If you ever meet your inner child, don t cry Tell them everything is gonna be alright World, hold on Instead of messing with our future, open up inside World, hold on Wonder you will have to answer to the children of the sky World, hold on Come one, everybody in the universe, come on World, hold on Wonder you will have to answer to the children of the sky Children of the sky alright Open up your heart Tell me, how do you feel Listen now, tell them everything, right here right now Alright, everybody, here in the world You are all the children, alright Together now, unite, and fight oooh Open up you heart, no, peace, love for everyone Oh, no no no no no, alright, to the four corners of the world Sing it loud, sing it loud, sing it loud loud loud World hold on on Sing it loud, sing it proud Everybody, yeah yeah yeah yeah, oooh Dont take no for an answer, no no, not today Right here,spread love, everybody join together now One , one heart, love and unity, everybody sing Yeah! World, hold on Come one, everybody in the universe, come on World, hold on Wonder you will have to answer to the children of the sky World, hold on Come one, everybody in the universe, come on World, hold on Wonder you will have to answer to the children of the sky
weak. sounds like you listened to stan too many times. only a few people can pull of psychopath rap and your not one of them. \t\t \t\t\t\t__________________