My memoir. Would love feedback!

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by ParanoidAtBest, Nov 28, 2012.

  1. #1 ParanoidAtBest, Nov 28, 2012
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    Well, I haven't posted here in a very long time. Life has had me pretty busy. Anyway, I remember about a year ago I posted a link to my memoir and you guys loved it! So, I finally have some time to pick it up again, and would love feed back!

    Here's the link: (by the way, it reads from the top of "Fuck it. Have to begin somewhere." to the bottom, the from the top to bottom of Seems it as grown~, then top to bottom of the very top post. Very unorganized, I know.)

    cannabisprime | Just another WordPress.com site

    I have poetry there, too.. But that stuff is kind of depressing.


    Have fun reading, guys. Thanks in advance for your input and time!

    -PAB :smoking:

    Edit: By the way, I'll be editing when I can. It's been edited a lot since I last posted it.
     
  2. I'll read it when I'm on a computer! I know how crutial feedback can be and how much I love it on my stuff :)
     
  3. Thanks so much! I really appreciate it. Just tel me what you think.

    :smoking:
     
  4. Sorry if I'm not supposed to double-post.. but meh.. I really just want some feedback.
     

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