my first real attempt at creating a song

Discussion in 'Music genres, Bands and Artists' started by burandino, Aug 26, 2010.

  1. on FL Studio 8. i am pretty happy with it, i will be laying some vocals over it in the near future, but i would love to have it rated, maybe even some suggestions from other FL users

    [ame]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pnlVFc1HIOc&feature=player_embedded[/ame]
     
  2. fucking love the 8bit drop.
    u need to put like some drumming or like metal/hardcoreish beats over this and it will be ill.
    plus 4minutes 20 :D
     
  3. I would add some parametric EQ to your drumline to give the snare a little more punch, also I would put a compressor on the drums to make them a little louder without distorting them. Other than that it was pretty dope :D
     
  4. thank you both, i will try both of your suggestions,
    and also the 4:20, i wasn't even trying to do that
     
  5. shit im not gonna lie at first i was like eh.

    then kept listening shit got dope as fuck man, good job, seem to just get better and better as it progressed.

    Your first attempt was pretty good, imagine if you keep continuing the possibilities, im sure you'll become in tune more and produce some ear poppin stuffman.

    :hello:, that thing in the video pic looks cool too. i wanna pet his belly.
     

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