Looking for feedback on my latest track!!!

Discussion in 'The Musician in U' started by BluntCruisin, Apr 11, 2012.

  1. You sound like more of a spoken word guy.. rap sounds much better with strong delivery but as far as your lyrics go, theyre not bad bro.. try to think of ways you can improve your delivery and flow, one way to do that is to try and write lyrics and rap in the style of your favorite rappers, eventually when you develop your own voice you can move out of that and make your own unique sounding music
     
  2. thanks man, yeah i know i'm kinda monotonous. lyrics are definitely my strong point, they come pretty easily to me

    appreciate it, i'm trying to be louder and more confident when i rap too
     

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