\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\tFuck a bitch, all i do is get money Its funny how i spit sick shit when im blunted Its funny how i turn a dollar to a hundred Its funny how you yap your gums but do nothin You start runnin, everytime i put up my fists You duck and you dodge but i bet you cant duck this Click clack, get back or its over Ill fuck your bitch til she cant sit, then roll over I smoke blunts til i cant see straight Then i go to the cupboard and get out 3 plates And i fill those motherfuckers up to the brim Eat so much, like its a motherfuckin sin Now lets begin, lets rap battle bastard Im white like a ghost but not friendly like casper Ill tear your face up, and my rhymes will eat ya soul Always share your stuff thats what my teacher told Me, so ill share this whole fuckin clip witcha You cant beat me, get the god damn pitcha Im by myself but your with all your goons Thinkin that you guysll put me into my tomb Dont you pussies ever think that your takin my life Ill pull the the tec 9 trigger til my knuckles turn white
I wouldnt put up on no record deal but if you were with your homies or in with people that be pretty cool
Honestly on that i was tryin to be over the top and literally as creative as i could because im fuckin blazed out my mind haha
Yo, if you want me to post some of my shit i will, but like, what he said you need to be more real with yourself and like just sit and let it all spill out, blah, im baked as fuck, i hate explaining this shit when im baked hahaha.
Looks like you just kinda wrote down whatever came to your head, let it sit in your mind and sort your shit out, then write it down.
if it was a freestyle and you didnt edit nothin, it would be pretty straight.. but if its a verse that you wrote up to record or something its pretty weak on the account that its too simple (imo).. its got basic one-syllable rhymes and not enough wordplay for my liking.. i liked your last bar tho, that shit went hard "Ill pull the the tec 9 trigger til my knuckles turn white"