I wrote this earlier today, not stoned :/

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by tokiemctokebag, Apr 13, 2011.

  1. Following the aberration
    Dis-linking all the facts you made
    He sucks up all the intestinal tract
    Falling in a broken slide
    His tendrils catch the white
    Soaked in red silk
    Succulent as the flesh of a carcass
    Better when it's fresh
    The warmth is brought every time
    With an itch of rashes and hills
    The creature crawls and covers itself
    As authoritative stance and
    Used to cover and cradle in a smother
    Like mother and child who other than
    They who smother under a broken hovering
    Of crass and dismissive rails
    This virus bug is unrelenting in its strike against the
    Broken cycle underneath the pigment regardless
    Of the color or the hesitation of his
    Idols and cruciform actions
    They creep beneath the silhouette of
    Undiscovered trenches who understands that
    We aren't allowed advances
    Who understands
    Who understands our advances
    No one but you
    The victim eyed by glass coping coats
    Those intellectual beards with balded scalps and
    Stethoscopes who could never trust or be trusted
    Could never love or understand why it is you've come
    Under attack and under command of
    This broken scaled beast that
    Lives within us all and not with in those that grasp
    For once you grasp you are the infect
    Searching for the nearest victim and lusting
    Lust lusting for a new nest to lay your mind an
    Image of broken sight for when they learn
    They propagate your race

    I'd like feedback, especially from those of you with glassy eyes, since I've been dry and not high for a while now, so please tell me how terrible this is...
     

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