Hey GC! Got a poem to read! :D

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by Ayso, Jun 11, 2010.

  1. Hey GC! I have always loved writing and I'd like some criticism if ya'll don't mind :D

    This very short poem is called "You" I never found another name :p


    No matter how much you may not believe me, I love you. Fortunately through both light and dark. You have shown me the same commitment and I am grateful for that. You keep shedding light over my redeeming shadows. You have shown me the beauty rooted in life and no matter how many times it may be ripped out, it will keep growing. I will never forget you, for I love and cherish the very sight of you. Your presence will be filled within me....forever.
     
  2. Not really a poem.
     
  3. nice, i like
     
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