Well, I can't stop thinking about her. And I made this after blazing one day. When I wrote it I was thinking of kinda writing song, so I guess its a poem/song, but isn't that pretty much what they are? Anyways here it is, tell me what you think? - "Have you ever imagined the perfect one; Looking around, never stopping till' the break of the sun; You'll know it when sparks fly when our eyes connect; We sit down talk for hours and watch the sunset; When were together, its as if we have no clue; I know that our love is so pure and true; Whenever your around, I feel all fuzzy inside; I'll never not think of you, your always on my mind; Your so beautiful the way you do it, you do just fine; One day I hope that you will be called mine; I'm always thinking of you, even if we part ways; I love you, and I always will till' the end of our days."
cool man..i like writing poetry to express my feelings...the only thing is, nobody but me knows about them(well i guess if you're reading this you know now)
Not bad at all, bt you should keep a standard rhyming scheme, and try not to repeat some of the same rhymes. Other than that its really nice.
