Demi's Delirious Drafts

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by dementiax, Mar 10, 2019.

  1. #1 dementiax, Mar 10, 2019
    Last edited: Jul 23, 2023
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  2. This is the 1st time I've read someone's erotica, so I guess you popped a mental cherry.
     
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  3. But was it okay?
     
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  4. Interesting I liked it. It reminds of something I did once with my ex.

    She put her hand down my pants while we were eating lunch outside during school. I still think about all the time.

    She also once sucked my dick outside behind a parking lot. She sollowed.
     
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  5. I used to prefer this to porn for awhile. Then I quit all that shtuff:cop:
     
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  6. Brilliant!!:popcorn::yummy:
     
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  7. honestly flawlessly written erotica. but your setup in the beginning was so well executed that I had no idea it was gonna be sexual until... it was.

    you could write anything. the talent for creating a story while pulling a reader in with every sentence is really strong
     
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  8. Wow Melody girl you talented! I am impressed lbvs and this was sexy af too.

    I had no idea you were such a good writing. I would like to see more of your work sometime :D


    ~Toni~
     
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  9. Well now. That was written nice and got me flowing. I'd like to read more of your work.
     
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  10. @dementiax . That's pretty awesome. I've written some erotica too. It's pretty fun. You've got talent.
     
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  11. Thank you all very much for the compliments! I'm a very humble person so this all means a lot to me! Stay tuned for my next post ;)
     
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  12. I used to write stuff like this back in the day, a lot of it was same sex erotica though and one was about two gay male space aliens in love.
     
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  13. Whoa whoa whoa, what happens next? Does he have HER for dessert? Who is this guy? So many questions!!!!!!!
     
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  14. I came across this like a week ago but didn’t read it because I was with my niece. Saw a post in the horny thread and instantly went searching lol
     
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  15. @dementiax Girlll have you done anything new so far. I want to read more by you!!



    ~Toni~
     
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  16. I have a few super-rough drafts that I'm working on! I'll post more here when I can muster up something nice!
     
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  17. #19 GorillaGherkin, May 11, 2019
    Last edited: May 11, 2019
    PG-13 if ya ask me luv.
    Shoulda had em shove er into a book shelf with his forearm while ripping er panties off with such force that It burns the skin on er hip.
    Also don’t forget that oral isn’t always submissive. I’d a had em whip er around throw a knee up on a shelf while eating er ass and finger fuck er at the same time. Juices flowing down to his wrist finger wrinkled like he been doin dishes.
     
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  18. Uh well. Thanks.
     
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