i wrote this last year for school but i was never able to turn it in... tell me what you think... would i have gotten an A or F??? Sweat in the eyes, blood in the sand. A soldiers body wrapped in blood stained bands. Night sky killers drop devastation as they explode. Only requiring a single man with a book of codes. 50-50 scoped and spotted ready on its stand. Torn apart families screaming throughout, this is our land. Day time murders acur as a ritual of aim, shoot, and reload. Think about it, all this over a single druglord. Politicians claiming this battle needs to expand. Ofcourse, it's not their little boy getting his own number brand.
Its a pretty violent poem, but its got good flow. Would've gotten an A for matching the criteria as a poem. I don't know what the teacher would say about the topic though
i write poetry all the time and i gotta say i rly like it. they only thing i think culd be improved is if u moved sum words around so it flowed a little better but otherwise good job