Each person will have 36 hours to check in, once both have checked in there will be a 24 hour window to post your verses. Remember the rules, 16 lines!!! Questions, just ask or refer to the original thread which I provided a link to below. Once both verses have been dropped, voting will ensue for 24 hours before a winner is decided. When writing your verses consider the following: NO FEEDING/FLIPPING NO RECYCLING NO SWAYING NO BITING Any questions on the definitions of the rules, see the original Rap Battle Tournament Thread in the link above. Sparkin Gettin me 1st round? Its like takin the swarm of a hornets liar, I'll put you in a frozen chamber, turn all your bones to vapor, The coordinator, Chop bodies up to store for later, You bitch, Ain't got no girl.. keep askin whores for favors, Pray to the lord and savior, You got no chance for life, Like if cancer striked.. Uppercuts bring massive flight, Shut you up.. No askin twice, Cut your guts.. Leavin you wit no appetite, I create disaster sights, Roll up on pussies with a mask and knife, I'm too crazy with these rhymes but too lazy to decide.. Why I hesitate when I blaze you with these lines.. But with his name he lays it out for all, This hungry hungry hippo likes opening his mouth for balls, I'll bring the whole south to brawl while he waitin at his house for calls, Hit em wit disease like dirty needles, Spreadin them infectiously, Call me Tragically hip cuz compared to urs my rhymes ahead by a century, No stress with these tenancies, If you think you winnin, like 'Rx', you 'wrecked on ecstasy', Ima dangerous mixture like messin with chemistry, eventually, you'll learn that u should have nothin but respect for me HippoPotamus420 This battle was never close, cause I'm sparking this queer to a cinder, your secret is you bitch made so folks confusing your gender, Like Victoria, lift up your shirt, lace bras cover your heart, But you wear it well, you make looking pussy into a statement or art, There's no quarter, those opposing get bent and cracked like ya fender, When armored trucks pile drive into ya car from front to the center, I overkill this malnourished rat by placing him in bear traps, watch it snapback, like fitted caps missing the stitching crap, I'm that boss adversary you couldn't beat if you cheated, typing your writtens for five hours, I think they look better deleted I'm a combination of Jesus and demons catching a wing cause I make hammers fly to cross him, then resurrect him again Put some acid in a pine box, then i threw him inside put the nail in the coffin laughing while he got buried alive When I'm sparkin this fag, there's no satisfaction like parliaments. Cause It's simple to sew the win up like shitty made cardigans. VOTING RULES Voting should also be based upon... PUNCHES NAME PLAY WORD PLAY PERSONALS FLOW MULTI'S ORIGINALITY In order for your vote to count you must leave an explanation as to why you voted the way you did, otherwise your vote will not be counted. You cannot vote for yourself, either.. Sparkin - 5 HippoPotamus420 - 2
I`m In 'N' ready to Vote, soo000n!! Strictly by the rules..... May the best rapper win!! <~~~~Posts some rap he's jamming to soulja boy tell 'em ~ Speakers goin' Hammer [VeVo] YouTube - Soulja Boy - Speakers Going Hammer
Shout outs to TexRx. I'll fit you into my verse somehow, you're crazy. Should drop by tonight. I really need to come hard this time, Hippo ain't no slouch.
Gettin me 1st round? Its like takin the swarm of a hornets liar, I'll put you in a frozen chamber, turn all your bones to vapor, The coordinator, Chop bodies up to store for later, You bitch, Ain't got no girl.. keep askin whores for favors, Pray to the lord and savior, You got no chance for life, Like if cancer striked.. Uppercuts bring massive flight, Shut you up.. No askin twice, Cut your guts.. Leavin you wit no appetite, I create disaster sights, Roll up on pussies with a mask and knife, I'm too crazy with these rhymes but too lazy to decide.. Why I hesitate when I blaze you with these lines.. But with his name he lays it out for all, This hungry hungry hippo likes opening his mouth for balls, I'll bring the whole south to brawl while he waitin at his house for calls, Hit em wit disease like dirty needles, Spreadin them infectiously, Call me Tragically hip cuz compared to urs my rhymes ahead by a century, No stress with these tenancies, If you think you winnin, like 'Rx', you 'wrecked on ecstasy', Ima dangerous mixture like messin with chemistry, eventually, you'll learn that u should have nothin but respect for me.
This battle was never close, cause I'm sparking this queer to a cinder, your secret is you bitch made so folks confusing your gender, Like Victoria, lift up your shirt, lace bras cover your heart, But you wear it well, you make looking pussy into a statement or art, There's no quarter, those opposing get bent and cracked like ya fender, When armored trucks pile drive into ya car from front to the center, I overkill this malnourished rat by placing him in bear traps, watch it snapback, like fitted caps missing the stitching crap, I'm that boss adversary you couldn't beat if you cheated, typing your writtens for five hours, I think they look better deleted I'm a combination of Jesus and demons catching a wing cause I make hammers fly to cross him, then resurrect him again Put some acid in a pine box, then i threw him inside put the nail in the coffin laughing while he got buried alive When I'm sparkin this fag, there's no satisfaction like parliaments. Cause It's simple to sew the win up like shitty made cardigans.
Hahah damn, loved this battle. Sparkin always has the flow going for him. Had his punches, really loved the hungry hungry hippo's line. Hippo put his work in though, for me he took the personals and name play by far, and also edged out Sparkin's punches. While Sparkin went more with a horrorcore like Ore's, Hippo kept the humor alive, with some violence, and a lot of original lines. These were my favorite... Like Victoria, lift up your shirt, lace bras cover your heart, But you wear it well, you make looking pussy into a statement or art, overkill this malnourished rat by placing him in bear traps, watch it snapback, like fitted caps missing the stitching crap, I'm that boss adversary you couldn't beat if you cheated, typing your writtens for five hours, I think they look better deleted +1 HippoPotamus420
Definately Sparkin for the win!! Here's my why.... 1 ~ I kept waiting to see what words were going to end up rhyming together at the end of each line = always the sign of a rap artist and... 2 ~ for excellent use of words, like......vapor instead of smoke, mask & knife and not just another gun, hungry hungry hippos, just because it's funny to me. Rap needs some comic relief sometimes and of course for dropping my profile~name but Rx is short for 'prescription'....you may have slam dunked the track w/ that!! ~ p e a c e ~ out! AND , hey, hippo420....leave off the queer and bitch and ya got something there..
Hippo gets my vote he hit some nice punches and Sparkin lost points making me re read a line because he spelled lair wrong lol didnt really make any sense first off but flowed ok but nothing really going at hippo hippo gets my vote
damn this is a nice battle.. the whole time i was reading hippo's i was almost sure i was gonna get it to spark and then i got to the last few lines and he finished hard. im gonna come back a lil later with my vote
my vote is for Sparkin. really good punches, multis, structure. it flowed very well when I was reading
PUNCHES-sparkin NAME PLAY-sparkin WORD PLAY- PERSONALS-hippo FLOW-sparkin MULTI'S-same ORIGINALITY-hippo sparkins verse just came out to me, hippo rhymed the victorias line perfectly, but i seen that too many times (the callin an opponent a girl..) +1 sparkin
yep, goin with Spark the verses were conceptually equal to me, and the flow was good on both, but spark had more complex rhymeschemes and a couple punches that made me actually laugh a lil.. +1 Sparkin
sparkin fuckin came crazy, boths had punches not many multis but it didnt matter, i loved them both, but in the end sparking had me flowing the most and just diggin his verse