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*BATTLE TOURNY* PuffPuffHOLD, coalman23, and Oregonized

Discussion in 'Music genres, Bands and Artists' started by cberry8, May 10, 2011.

  1. #1 cberry8, May 10, 2011
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    NO CHECK IN'S NECESSARY FOR THIS ROUND!!
    48 HOURS TO POST YOUR VERSES!!


    Remember the rules, 8 lines!!! Questions, just ask or refer to the original thread which I provided a link to below.

    Once both verses have been dropped, voting will ensue for 24 hours, then the winners, in this case, will be decided. Because there are 4 contestants, the

    When writing your verses consider the following:
    NO FEEDING/FLIPPING
    NO RECYCLING
    NO SWAYING
    NO BITING

    Any questions on the definitions of the rules, see the original Rap Battle Tournament Thread in the link above.

    In order for your vote to count you must leave an explanation as to why you voted the way you did, otherwise your vote will not be counted. You cannot vote for yourself, either. You MUST vote for 2 contestants for this round.



    PuffPuffHOLD
    I pop off like them nails you keep biting with rhymes im designing
    To express a consciousness people can't see if they're inside me,
    my speech seeds flame n this brain leaks propane so emcees behave
    as I cremate old stylos when I reinstate frees' that amaze,
    Rearrange this tourny so you lames compete for second place
    If you think my hearts a tender place you'll depart with tendons misplaced,
    You serve dinner plates stuffed with inner hate like chefs next to bobby flay
    While women ask my technique to bless them when they ovulate

    Oregonized
    i'll stab the two of you or actually slap you with flashy cuticles, i see two clueless dudes,
    smash you on all the bad tunes you use, the aftermath both of you are doomed to lose,
    your raps are sad, a radio tuned to the blues, my raps are sav radio tuned to the news,
    im abusing the dudes who couldn't team up and beat me, just steam up like pink meat,
    believe me you cant defeat me with a genie, obscenely i cleanly put you in dream sleep,
    because im sleeping with Nefertiti, a pharaoh amongst men my team can barely see me,
    with bone marrow of tungsten and tough skin nobody can breach me im a speech fiend,
    deceasing would be puff and cole when im speaking so tuck and hold when retreating,

    coalman23
    I don't pull triggers, but you shouldn't of said somthin'
    I stare at a screen calmly while pressin a red button
    Step back, you bastards is misinformed
    I send logistical swarms to cause statistical storms
    My skill is so clear it takes physical form
    I'm ruthless, but my precision is mathematics
    I break backs and pop faggots with automatics N' tacit* tactics
    I'll bend you're spine backwards like a rapid acrobatic



     

  2. No need for this round, just post your 8
     
  3. I pop off like them nails you keep biting with rhymes im designing
    To express a consciousness people can’t see if they’re inside me,
    my speech seeds flame n this brain leaks propane so emcees behave
    as I cremate old stylos when I reinstate frees’ that amaze,
    Rearrange this tourny so you lames compete for second place
    If you think my hearts a tender place you’ll depart with tendons misplaced,
    You serve dinner plates stuffed with inner hate like chefs next to bobby flay
    While women ask my technique to bless them when they ovulate

    every one loses to bobby flay so chefs hate him lol watch the food channel.
     
  4. ^^^I'm feelin` so Gansta after hearing yo lyrical rap~sheet!

    nom ~ nom ~ nom ~ nom ~ nom!!!!!! :)

    [​IMG]
     
  5. i'll stab the two of you or actually slap you with flashy cuticles, i see two clueless dudes,
    smash you on all the bad tunes you use, the aftermath both of you are doomed to lose,
    your raps are sad, a radio tuned to the blues, my raps are sav radio tuned to the news,
    im abusing the dudes who couldn't team up and beat me, just steam up like pink meat,
    believe me you cant defeat me with a genie, obscenely i cleanly put you in dream sleep,
    because im sleeping with Nefertiti, a pharaoh amongst men my team can barely see me,
    with bone marrow of tungsten and tough skin nobody can breach me im a speech fiend,
    deceasing would be puff and cole when im speaking so tuck and hold when retreating,
     
  6. Dry right now, dealer's dropping off a zip later.
    I'll post once i'm inspired.
    Probably around 8 or 9.
     
  7. #8 TexRx, May 11, 2011
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    Queen NeferTiti!!!

    Oregonized izzz tha Winner, here!........

    :)

    [​IMG] [​IMG]
     
  8. ^who the fuck is this guy?
     
  9. ahaha Texrx goin round hyping up everyone who's posted so far

    hopefully he'll actually vote once prelims are done...
     
  10. #11 ArtilleryShell4, May 11, 2011
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    Where the fucks the rest of the rhymes at?

    .
     
  11. you have to vote for two people.. coal is gonna post later so we gotta wait on him before voting.
     

  12. OK.... coal is gonna post later.... So I gotta wait......before I vote 4 2 peeps!!!!



    :hello:


    ^^^^ That's not a Guy, That's Queen Nefertiti!! She was once tha Queen of Egypt!!

    Get it yet? Maybe Jesus was actually black... Definately a dark~skinned man, fo` sure

    There were no light skinned Egyptian leaders in that era......Think about it!!!

    [I'm not making a threat, but... I'm not the kinda man ya wanna just 'mess around' with.......]

    [​IMG]


    :)
     

  13. Wasn't talking about Queen Nefertiti..
     
  14. I don't pull triggers, but you shouldn't of said somthin'
    I stare at a screen calmly while pressin a red button
    Step back, you bastards is misinformed
    I send logistical swarms to cause statistical storms
    My skill is so clear it takes physical form
    I'm ruthless, but my precision is mathematics
    I break backs and pop faggots with automatics N' tacit* tactics
    I'll bend you're spine backwards like a rapid acrobatic

    * Tacit (ta-sit) - hard to understand.
     
  15. Oregonized and coalman

    oregon- the flow never stopped, i like em without hitches

    coalman- he tied each line together and didn't waste a word
     
  16. PPH - Might have had the best 8 in this thread tbh, not really as much of a battle though. You guys didn't really go at each other except for Ore's. Good opener though, flow was there aside from a couple of spots..
    This did it for me though..

    my speech seeds flame n this brain leaks propane so emcees behave
    as I cremate old stylos when I reinstate frees’ that amaze,
    Rearrange this tourny so you lames compete for second place

    Ore - Took me a couple of reads to really get the flow but second time around I got a much better feel for it. Threw more punches in there than anyone else, pretty original. The horrorcore part wasn't bad but could have been more graphic is it's a battle verse, or had more personals.

    coalman, I did actually like yours. The main reason I picked the other 2 was because you never really developed a scheme of any sort, you had the rhymes but it was a bit sloppier. Had the punches though, a little generic but they were there. Not bad though, don't think I've read any of your stuff before.

    +1 PuffPuffHOLD & Oregonized
     
  17. PuffPuff and Oregon.

    pph, u really came man. haha im sittin here stoned and as im reading ur verse, the imagery had me visualizing everything you were saying. it was awesome =) plus u didnt skip a beat. nice and clean.

    oregon, dawg u just had this fucking nasty flow. dense with multis and punchlines. i loved it.


    good luck next round guys
     
  18. You can't judge these based on flow, anybody can flow on paper.
    I've always felt this way.
     
  19. puffpuffhold got my first vote, coalman got my second
     

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