let me know what y'all think I arrived in the room Not a moment too soon For in the dark of night A fire did light Before the dawn of day After the grey of night Love came to his aid And love was filled with fright Sorrow no more Could decide his life And fear no more Could continue the strife But I arrived in the room Just a moment too soon
I enjoyed it and I don't typically like rhyming poems. the ending was nice, I liked the pattern change