Hey Guys, i need your opinions on a poem i wrote about a girl. Lemme know if yall think its worth sending it to her or not. Erika's Poem- The girl with the ass so fine oh how i want to make it mine Have sex with me on the phone cause we both love to bone with that body so damn tone come to me, ill make you moan with all this time on my hands all i can think about is removing your pants your tits arnt so big but thats okay cause your ass makes up for it anyday. I know its abit cheesy but it really conveys how i feel about this girl. what do you guys think, should i give it to her or maybe touche it up abit?
Wayyy too superficial. That will not turn her on.Edit: hands and pants don't rhyme...lolSent from my iPhone using Grasscity Forum mobile app
If shes a freak, you in there like swim wear. If shes more on the conservative side i would tone it down a lil bit. Still let her know how much you dig her physique though, that'll flatter her.
im bored so i typed out a reply to this ohhhh daddy you no i love to flirt sometimes i just can't help it, i just need to lift up my skirt but ya not here so my pussy is left just quivering in fear anticipating the way you sway in this pussay all god damn day so i guess ill have to settle with hearing you moan and groan via the tele phone while i imagine your bone stuck in my tight little honeypot oooooooweee its a trap I'm releasing my honey all over you, even while i hold your gat until you moan and groan and give me what i want release that sweet juice inside of me then just maybe ill let you slip out of me.
It all depends on the girl and your relationship with her, nothing else. This could get you laid, or it could lead to the girl not wanting to talk to you anymore. It's not something I would ever send, definitely not my style lmao. Sent from my iPhone using Grasscity Forum
Whenever you write a love poem you always gotta ask yourself before giving it to somebody..."Would JT say this shit?" I dont think JT would say that shit.
This is a love poem? Dont get me wrong i suppose its the thought that counts, but im not sure if your getting the "love" point across. To the guy who said he was "bored" and wrote a reply poem. hm hm *regularshowstyle* bet you've been waiting months for a chance
thats not a love poem thats a sex poem lol word of advice if you actually send it, throw out the part where you say her tits are just okay and her ass makes up for it. girls are very reactive to any type of criticism on their body so just 100% avoid just to be safe lol