A little verse im writin for fun

Discussion in 'Music genres, Bands and Artists' started by CheechMarley420, May 23, 2008.

  1. So i like rappin, and i think i got some skills
    What do you guys think?

    I seen some shit thatll make you cringe and stutter
    I grew up with a needle in the arm of my mother
    My brother wasnt there, i doubt he really cared
    This is the story of my life so please just let me share
    I lived in a house a while, kitchen with broken tiles
    To get away from this hell id run a thousand miles
    Man fuck a smile, what could make me happy?
    Besides this weed, puff puff now im laughing
    With every single thing that ive seen in my life
    I really wonder how im sleepin at night
    Sometimes i wanna die but suicide ive never tried
    If your lookin at this rhyme just believe i never lie

    Its pretty short but be honest what do you think?
     
  2. its pretty good, i dig the slant rhyme
     

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