A fast 16 bar verse i just recorded

Discussion in 'The Musician in U' started by Dylan Dude, Aug 28, 2013.

  1. #1 Dylan Dude, Aug 28, 2013
    For this verse i used 3 syllable rhymes. My friend is gonna have a verse on this too but id love to get some opinions on this. Let me know what you think please
    https://soundcloud.com/dylan-beatz/warning
     
    If you hate/don't like it, please explain what you don't like. And if you do like it, what do you like?
    I'd appreciate it, thanks

     
  2. #2 Milky Smoke, Aug 31, 2013
    dope
     
  3. #3 Dylan Dude, Oct 9, 2013
  4. #4 Milky Smoke, Dec 1, 2013
    Damn. Lyrics are good, but flow is wild bro.
     
  5. #5 The Nickatina, Dec 2, 2013
    tame the flow
     
  6. #6 fancypantsdawg, Dec 2, 2013
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    Diggin this dude, beat and everything. From 0.34-0.40 it gets a lil fuzzy, can't really hear what you're saying clearly. I'd work on enunciation there.
     
    Keep it up brotha! Was happily surprised at how much I liked this.
     
  7. #7 The Nickatina, Dec 3, 2013
    overall  youre doing good, but you need to flow a bit more clearly at times
     

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