wallowing in drugged out bliss my mind wanders inside, through caverns darkness, odd events i witness with vibes of solitude outside but what will the future hold? without reassurance in a world without borders or radiation
Sorry Cottons but I must out do you. *Three thumbs up* It really was nice though. I'm very glad it didn't trail off into pointless prose like so many poems do. I'd be happy to read more
in exactly the middle of the heart of nowhere theres never much to do. buy enlightenment for $20, when mushroom men invade our lives. i guess im willing. "are you a cop?" hell, when bad urges confuse our inner rolemodel things turn bizarre. one day, soon after at a wasted moment in time light mingles with sounds, perhaps voices confuse when these odd plumes of smoke travel into my mind
This stuff is just awesome. I really like the first one, nice and simple. The second one feels choppy to me, but it's definately got a good sequence to it
that's cool that you can write stoned... i can't even try it. my attention span disappears and i can't keep focus on a single thought long enough to turn it into something, lol.