Each contestant has 24 hours to check in, once both opponents have checked in, they have 24 hours to drop their verses. Remember the rules, 8 bars/16 lines!!! Questions, just ask refer to the original thread which I provided a link to below. Once both verses have been dropped, voting will ensue for 24 hours, then the winner will be decided. Good luck! When writing your verses consider the following: NO FEEDING/FLIPPING NO RECYCLING NO SWAYING NO BITING Any questions on the definitions of the rules, see the original 'Rap Battle Tournament' Thread in the link above. In order for your vote to count you must leave an explanation as to why you voted the way you did, otherwise your vote will not be counted. You cannot vote for yourself, either. jo3l37 I’m “smackin’ hoes” who “acting roles” like if you played in a movie, I’m ‘bout to throw “Berry in a blender” like I’m making a smoothie, Alright...I’m going in on him.. You faking it truly, you’re a poser with flows, I’m “pounding frees” that bring effects of coming “down from E” - They’re slowin’ ya roll, I’m controlling the globe - I spin the axis and spit it rapid, When I “strike the mic” you got a “lightless life” - You’ll live in blackness!, This is madness, by this I mean you getting to the final round, When I “make this rap” I’ll “break ya back” and sport a spinal crown, To celebrate the victory and your misery when I win like this, My “steeze is violence” while “C is silent” like indictment, You “voting here” the “chosen’s clear”, it’s Exrae who’s a better ‘cee, Who’ll always be “ahead of C” like the fucking letter B!, You’ll never see him making the profit and gain, Cause my punches turn “Berry Red” like he had straw in his name, I’ll “flow first” so I can skip your “whole verse” which is the sound of a boring spit, First place? HAH, be lucky you even made it to the last round of the tournament! (Indictment is pronounced "in-dite-ment" C is silent like INDICTMENT) cberry8 Attackin' Joel with iller tactics when in fact I'm only scrappin' You can't be nappin' on me with all the sleep that you been lackin' Got yourself on manic depressants, Eyes reddened-over and glazed Spittin' through haze, I keep it clear, Call me Claritin with some pace Cause you can trust this ain't a phase, Only met the tip of the ice When half as nice is your best: I'm two times, Three times it; Thrice Absorbin' shots like I'm ice, I Penetrate through to your soul Throat swoll up so damn much that you can't speak or control I know this can't be your first, It's through the pain in your voice & though I wasn't your pick, You know I woulda been a poor choice & this kid reps the 207? No wonder Maine's not on the map I guess elevate, Bring the facts, & throw the whole state on my back Fight the strain & the pressure to censor those who ain't better With words written by Webster, You won't pass a judge, Less a jester So I'll hoard each resource with no recourse, Watch you fester I seemed to outwit & outlast, Outclassed by a mouse like Sylvester *Shots like ice referring to a shot of alcohol being absorbed by the ice/water *207 is Maine's area code *Words written by Webster referring to Merriam-Webster's dictionary *Sylvester is the cat from Looney Tunes VOTE TALLY jo3l37: 5 cberry8: 5
At the "check in" I'll "wreck him", he can face the truth, That I'm making "Berry" cease to be like I ate the fruit
He still hasn't checked in and it's been over 24 hours, but I'll drop anyways. I’m “smackin’ hoes” who “acting roles” like if you played in a movie, I’m ‘bout to throw “Berry in a blender” like I’m making a smoothie, Alright...I’m going in on him.. You faking it truly, you’re a poser with flows, I’m “pounding frees” that bring effects of coming “down from E” - They’re slowin’ ya roll, I’m controlling the globe - I spin the axis and spit it rapid, When I “strike the mic” you got a “lightless life” - You’ll live in blackness!, This is madness, by this I mean you getting to the final round, When I “make this rap” I’ll “break ya back” and sport a spinal crown, To celebrate the victory and your misery when I win like this, My “steeze is violence” while “C is silent” like indictment, You “voting here” the “chosen’s clear”, it’s Exrae who’s a better ‘cee, Who’ll always be “ahead of C” like the fucking letter B!, You’ll never see him making the profit and gain, Cause my punches turn “Berry Red” like he had straw in his name, I’ll “flow first” so I can skip your “whole verse” which is the sound of a boring spit, First place? HAH, be lucky you even made it to the last round of the tournament! (Indictment is pronounced "in-dite-ment" C is silent like INDICTMENT)
Attackin' Joel with iller tactics when in fact I'm only scrappin' You can't be nappin' on me with all the sleep that you been lackin' Got yourself on manic depressants, Eyes reddened-over and glazed Spittin' through haze, I keep it clear, Call me Claritin with some pace Cause you can trust this ain't a phase, Only met the tip of the ice When half as nice is your best: I'm two times, Three times it; Thrice Absorbin' shots like I'm ice, I Penetrate through to your soul Throat swoll up so damn much that you can't speak or control I know this can't be your first, It's through the pain in your voice & though I wasn't your pick, You know I woulda been a poor choice & this kid reps the 207? No wonder Maine's not on the map I guess elevate, Bring the facts, & throw the whole state on my back Fight the strain & the pressure to censor those who ain't better With words written by Webster, You won't pass a judge, Less a jester So I'll hoard each resource with no recourse, Watch you fester I seemed to outwit & outlast, Outclassed by a mouse like Sylvester *Shots like ice referring to a shot of alcohol being absorbed by the ice/water *207 is Maine's area code *Words written by Webster referring to Merriam-Webster's dictionary *Sylvester is the cat from Looney Tunes Sorry, I hate throwing references in but I wanted to cover my ass
My vote go to cberry, His last 4 lines was pretty good to end his rhymes as in murdering the mouse joel did pretty good as well too I ain't lying but cberry did a bit better in my opinion
Good battle. Imma break it down like this... Punches - Berry Multies - Jo3l Flow - Berry Wordplay/Nameplay - Jo3l Content - Berry Complexity - Jo3l While it was a close one for me.. Vote goes to Jo3l. Both had good verses but Jo3l's verse felt a little more raw. You can tell he put some good thoughts into how to diss Berry using his name.. This line KILLED me. (in a good way) You’ll never see him making the profit and gain, Cause my punches turn “Berry Red” like he had straw in his name, Such a simple concept but the punch hit hard, and was an example of good nameplay. Berry did really well.. I had to read both verses a couple times to pick a winner, which tells you the decision wasn't easy. Like I said before.. both did good but Jo3l just did a little better today. Could have went either way to be honest. +1 Jo3l
Damn Berry flowed mad good But Joel just hit punches from the get go.... ima have to come back im real high I dont want to say joel just cause I laughed my ass off at that blender line
i pretty much broke it down to punches flow and multis punches- berry flow-joel multi's-berry good battle guys some dope stuff! +1cberry
nice battle guys. berry, great verse homie. but what it really came down to for me was joel's word/nameplay. even though i think berry's flow was smoother throughout and he finished hard, joel's witty lines made up for it. +1 joel this makes it 3-3
+1 for Joel. He had a more battle style verse and stronger punches. Berry your style is dope but doesnt fit in battles as well.
Word, let's see how many more votes we can get. Skies, you're in charge of closing this shit, right? I don't think I should be haha