I wish I would have written when I was younger but now I just spew crazy stuff like this.. In my mind the dreams collide and crash upon the waves my brain and flashes of life and anything good just fades away I'm partly insane and slowly decayed i'm hardly a human at all I try to fit in and try to do right and be a man that stands tall but the bullshit cascades and the light soon but fades and all I hit is a wall.. once my mind soon subsides and slowly comes down to a halt i try and find the peace inside but realize i'm made of salt salt and bone and energy n skin and all of the things between part god part demon part angelic spirit until the chains give in i wish I could just change the world but noone fuckin cares i wish I could just scream and shout but noones fuckin there my mind told me that one day that the sea and flames will rise and all the things i picture inside will appear right before my eyes...
Yeah I like that one I did when I was younger. It basically means that every single day was dark empty and depressing, but that I would never give up in the hope that eventually a day would come along that changed that. Teenage angst / BPD basically but with a twist of optimism. Sometimes just a tiny spark is all you need to show you the way. Yours is crazy haha but it's good, I like it. It's very expressive and has a nice flow / rhyme structure. I liked you one on the previous page as well, you're a decent poet. What does this mean? salt and bone and energy n skin and all of the things between part god part demon part angelic spirit until the chains give in My interpretation is that you are all of these things, but not out of choice, and that it not the real you. In other words you are unable to be your true self in the world we live in? Since that first one I did as a teenager I've only really written love poems which is kinda lame but I will share them anyway. This one I wrote to tell my girlfriend I love her for the first time, which was on her birthday and came with an 8 diamond necklace with two interlocking gold hearts that I'd been holding onto for about 8 years waiting for the right person to give it to. I'd had 3 semi-serious relationships with girls I loved in those 8 years but for some reason never decided to give them the necklace. Me and girlfriend now had only been going out a month or so at the time but I guess sometimes you just know! We're grown so close like wheat on farms From Victoria Quays to eachothers arms I guess I knew from the start That you were my friend, accomplice and sweetheart So as our souls connect and our futures show There's something you should know It feels so right, so real, so true <Her name>, I love you Note: Victoria Quays is a place where we used to meet right in the beginning. It is like the end of a canal where I would skate while she rolls spliffs and then we'd smoke and chat until silly o clock in the morning by the canal, the foundation of our relationship if you will. This is it: And then this one, because I was bored as work: There's something about you That makes the sun shine brighter Life more colourful And the peaceful moments quieter When I see your face The sparkle in your eyes And I glimpse inside To that beautiful place where your soul resides It makes me smile There's something about you Realer than trees, the leaves Realer than the air we breathe And I know in my heart that we're meant to be Because this feeling It makes me feel complete I've done some rapping as well I'll see if I can dig it up. I think the lyrics and flow and that was pretty good but stylistically more like poetry to music ya know? Not hip hop which has become so ubiquitous with rapping. Don't get me wrong I love hip hop but that's just not my own personal style. Some of it is actually really dark/deep now I think about it.
hah thanks yeah I know what you mean about the dark constant and always telling yourself days will be better, glad we finally reached that stage! I never even knew I liked writing until one day I just did it and ever since I've been just trying to tweak my style and incorporate what goes on to what I write. Those poems you posted above are nice though, really good flow and I like how you used your relationship foundation in the poem to really set the stage. I also have tried my hand at rapping and freestyle mic nights but just can't find the right beat that I can vibe with, it's either acapella or it has to happen randomly in my case lol as far as what that line means I sometimes look at myself as an entity that is free flowing through the energies of space n time and just happened to stop in this body to see what life is like during this time period so yes exactly what you stated lol. idk why I feel this way but just always have its strange when you think about it. I feel like i've lived thousands of years and i'm slowly running out of energy.
On the way back from the track I dropped my snack pack People lookin and laughin cause my snack all black I sat on the curb like a warm cheese curd wishing I had my snack back and wasn't such a nerd.
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Relationship Love me or kill me sew me or tear me ridicule and respect me take a part and morph to your own come closer and touch me take me back home can you see my face? can you tell my stare? straight through you into we take a step, touch me, touch me dusty despair clinging on this bottle shelved for ages waiting to break drink the glass melted together give me a reason to stay The Popper The pill popper plunges down the hole, rummaging for scraps unwanted. A scavenger of mind and heart along the tunnel of societies haunted. Orbs of energy illuminate the hieroglyphic walls set as law. But the pill popper pushes whichever which side will fall. Carving another escape, taking further his own demise, It's no wonder why the popper collapses, under caps of cracked stone lies. It's no surprise.
One foot in the grave and looking towards the heavens Reaching for the stars, I jumped, and never landed Sent from my iPhone using Grasscity Forum
Not so much a poem,as it is a rap. I wrote this back in 1987. I also wrote music to it too. Gangsta rap was at it's peak in 1987. So I wrote a gansta rap song. I'm a crip from Compton I'm a blood from Watts I got an UZI in my hand and I call the shots I got an UZI in my hand, I got my finger on the trigger And I'll blow you away cause i'm a mean fuckin nigga. The po po say there aint nothing I can do But there is one thing I do a lot better than you I can raaaaaaaaaaaaaaap Yeah listen to me raaaaaaaaaaaaaaaap Don't you preach to me 'bout no law and order You read me my rights And I'll be fuckin your daughter I'm thirsty bitch now go get me some water I do as I please I do as I oughta! Coty