Write a high-ku

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by incrededibles, Jul 1, 2018.

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  1. #61 Kushcumber, Jul 3, 2018
    First haiku ever written
    I do not know what to say
    Maybe after bong rips

    Is that 5-7-5? English is my second language and I am not sure :love-m3j:
    Feel free to correct me :confused_2:
     
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  2. #62 HIGHliketheSKY, Jul 3, 2018
    Close! I think you got 7, 7 6. Remove a word from the top line. A lil tweak and you golden
     
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  3. #63 HIGHliketheSKY, Jul 3, 2018
    Like fine cavier
    You ain't in my caliber
    I'm sweet you just sour
     
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  4. #64 incrededibles, Jul 3, 2018
    Avocado dream
    Fruit of the Guacamole
    Don’t swallow the pit


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  5. #65 Annicus, Jul 3, 2018
    What can I do or say?
    Talking to god, yes I pray
    My heart is so very gray.



    I think I am a somewhat ok writer, actually no I think I'm good, I write from experience and put my feelings on paper. I dream of writing things for people, used to make extra money back in school by writing reports, essays, papers, etc point is If you needed something written I was the one you contacted. I love to write.
     
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  6. #66 HIGHliketheSKY, Jul 3, 2018
    Like a snake in night
    They always make the first strike
    Fakes can never hide
     
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  7. #67 HIGHliketheSKY, Jul 3, 2018
    People come and go
    True colors will always show
    Who dat? I don't know.
     
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  8. #68 HIGHliketheSKY, Jul 3, 2018
    Bong hits a rippin'
    We California livin'
    Tequila sippin'
     
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  9. #69 HIGHliketheSKY, Jul 4, 2018
    Overdosed on love
    She fit you just like a glove
    You can't get enough

    @incrededibles I can't believe more folks ain't in here this is addicting. You sick of me yet LOL
     
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  10. #70 HIGHliketheSKY, Jul 4, 2018
    When will peace prevail
    Will I live to tell the tale
    Only time can tell

    When will peace prevail
    When hell freeze like ice water
    Will mankind bother?
     
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  11. #71 incrededibles, Jul 4, 2018
    You’re helping this thread live you beautiful soul!! I’m happy about it and yeah people here are missing out
     
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  12. #72 Annicus, Jul 4, 2018
    My feelings on paper well the internet
    Thought I was all set
    I will always keeping a pen fairly handy
    After all I do write for the bandy
     
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  13. #73 HIGHliketheSKY, Jul 4, 2018
    ;wub:

    I've been thinking of them at the most random times of day too LOL
     
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  14. #74 incrededibles, Jul 5, 2018
    Tell the lethargy
    Please leave and stop bothering
    I want to feel free



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  15. #75 HIGHliketheSKY, Jul 5, 2018
    Sky is the limit
    Get like you in high limit
    Never quittin it
     
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  16. #76 HIGHliketheSKY, Jul 6, 2018
    Just a little tree
    Lil for you a Lil for me
    Blissful and serene:weed-4:
     
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  17. #77 weednotcrack, Jul 6, 2018
    I'm going to fuck this
    high-ku up because I Don't know
    What a Syllable is

    :)
     
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  18. #78 incrededibles, Jul 6, 2018
    My chest feeling numb
    My vision almost blurry
    My body feels weak


    Here’s a high-ku about the symptoms I feel now and the internet says I’m dying :(


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  19. #79 HIGHliketheSKY, Jul 6, 2018
    She just make me weak
    Mary Jane is so unique
    Takes me to my peak
     
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  20. #80 HIGHliketheSKY, Jul 7, 2018
    Saturday knows best
    Plenty o time to get rest
    Drink, sleep, eat, smoke sex.

    LOL
     
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