I just finished writing a bunch of this. I feel like it needs something. Maybe some vocals, but should they be like rap lyrics or something more chill like an RnB singer? Idk what's your opinion? I'd love to hear any feedback, negative or positive!
Thanks for posting your music. It takes a lot of courage to ask anonymous internet listeners to make comments. Most of the time they aren't very constructive and can leave the musician frustrated. (I know firsthand). You have a cool upbeat vibe on your basic idea. Quite different from my musical experimentation, but musicians of any genre have one thing in common - our work is very personal to us... I would suggest a few things. Reverb on the keyboard track for more ambience and space. A cool bass line that runs counter to the main idea. Rhythm guitar with a touch of bite to spice it up a touch. Female vocals in a Jazzy vein. Making your own music is really fun huh? Keep up the good work.
Thanks for the feedback! Yeah I've been making music for a few years now and sometimes I write something i'm not sure what to do with. I appreciate you taking the time to listen and I'll definitely betaking your advice into consideration!