What do you think of my bands first song?

Discussion in 'Music genres, Bands and Artists' started by Origins, Aug 19, 2011.

  1. don't quit your day job
     
  2. Not bad for a metal song.

    But some constructive critisism.
    Vocals are way to loud, compared to the instruments.
    The delay on the vocals is on a way too high setting.

    When it get's to the singing part, the tone completely changes. It sounds like it should be in a Asian video game.
    Some effects are unessecary.
    Not too much rythem. It's not constructed right IMO.

    Just trying to help
     
  3. I appreciate the criticism. Most of it was producer side, but still much appreciated. I agree with you on the sound of the mix, its screwy, he tried putting compression on the whole final mix to master it, but obviously thats not the way youre supposed to do it. As for the vocal echoing, its way too high for my liking as well. Also, what do you mean by not too much rhythm? The whole song is constructed with rhythm.. and it all follows the same consecutive structure. What parts do you think dont flow right, if you could specify? Also, I feel as theres not enough singing in the song to justify the tone for his singing. If we added more I'm sure it would definitely solve that problem, were actually revising it and adding singing right after the breakdown after the first singing part.
     

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