Went to a party tonight, and i realized i smoke more weed than anyone there. Couldnt spit any game at all either, my talkin wasnt smooth and neither were my moves, im thinkin maybe its time that i put down that dime bag and started my spittin, get my life and all the shit together just so i can afford the way i burn her? maybe i should just say fuck em and my thing, but everyway so far still ends with sting. shit i dont know what to do, all i know is ive smoked myself through and im not sure what to do. yea that was freestyle, please dont take it. ill endup using it. anyway. tell me what you think.
I have no idea what you just said. If it's because you can't write for shit, that makes me feel better. If it's because you're using slang that I don't recognize, that makes me feel bad, bc I'm only 25.
haha yea? for me its not really learnin how to freestyle, but more of just practicing. I do a lot of writing too, i think i saved another verse from that song that i wrote down last night...i in fact just found it. Solace Sober? nah you never heard those words together, and yet theyre startin to get closer never thought id even consider it but man all this bullshit maybe i need a reality check cause man those checks are comin slowly can barely holdon to my money im used to the good life but maybe this time i took too big a dive Ther term "solace" is from my name, "Solace in Lyric" and solace meens like.. comfrot in a bad situation, so my nickname from some of my friends is just solace, which is why i used that instead of my real name
Not a fan of rap/hip-hop r u Its art dude. I mean, I've heard better (no offense cuz ur not bad longbord) but would you tell Shakespeer to speak normal p.s. Longbord, ur op WAS Hella confusing cuz i thought it was JUST a story
Hahaha no offense taken, honestly i was just really high and wanted to tell a story, ended up rhyming one line by accident and thought "hey! why not?"
living life broke is for fucking jokes cause when push comes to shove i poke back leaving n***** with asthma attacks im to fast they can't react matter fact i kinda like it like that you think you got shine hop on board but don't leave me bored or ill pop the 22 steal your shoes and blow your whole damn crew faster and all you gonna hear is laughter O you thought i was casper
Might want to work on rhyming, cause not much of that rhymed, or maybe it was hard to tell cause of how you wrote it.
you tryna be a ghost, rhymeskillz, i got the most. i dont mean to boast, i just brag, while u smokin on that schwag. i got that trainwreck on deck, about to take a rip, just one sec.....okay, back with another jay, all i need is weed, fuck that tanqueray. get blasted off that jurassic, when smokin that green im never passive.
To be honest i thought you were telling me an actual story and not trying to freestyle. But thats probably a good song but since this is the internet and i can't tell what rhythm you would sing it in. But i guess it would make for some good lyrics. I'm a bit drunk, or buzzed on a slightly higher level and i imagined hearing it in a rock song and it sounds pretty good. If you're trying to rap add a few rhymes in it. I know not all raps have rhymes but i couldn't tell that verse from a rap song or a rock/country song. All though i imagined it in a rock song and it sounded pretty good. P.S. I spent like 13 minutes writing this just because of the words rhythm and rhyme i always forget how to spell those two words. FUCK YOU AMERICAN/ENGLISH LITERATURE!!!