its like a designed suicide its like we failed, though we tried its the invention of our own demise, searching for spies, tho it was i we looked in books and we looked in the skies. we evolved around the tools we had made and by those tools, we shall be betrayed silently. unknowingly. is this why were here? to simply... live in our fear? impossible. fear is uninhabitable. it has no rhyme nor reason no patterns nor seasons. for on ourselves, we will commit treason for the fear from our own creation will eventually lead to our own damnation.
Love it. If it was me though i would get rid of the 'tho' in the fourth line so it is just 'it was i', i think it would give it a much better flow. And gives it a shorter line just before the last line on the first rhyming scheme. Thats just me though.