EDIT: AFTER COUNTING VOTES WITH EXPLANATIONS - THE FINAL RESULT WAS: Skies: 13 votes Smoke: 3 votes instead of the projected 16-5 from the poll. LEARN HOW TO VOTE FOR THE UPCOMING ROUNDS / ROUND 1 BATTLES STILL IN PROGRESSION! voting closed - i could let it keep going for another hour but there's no shot @ the result changing so thats it. dope battle Smoke - we'll meet again maybe even this tourney if i organize some wildcard shit Winner: UpFromTheSkies VOTERS: ANYONE CAN VOTE, WITH THE EXCEPTION OF THE TWO BATTLERS. YOUR VOTE WILL ONLY BE COUNTED IF YOU POST A (BRIEF) EXPLANATION OF WHY YOU VOTED FOR THE VERSE YOU DID. the poll is designed to show who voted for who - so your poll vote will only be counted if you POST YOUR EXPLANATION. another early battle continued from the fail-tourney.
i never ever let it get off limits from my etiquette forever sick straight off the dome with stunning rhetoric i better get the praise i deserve with displays of the verbs that i pave on the curb while i'm blazing the herb i'm amazing these nerds - and my opponent's gonna steady choke yo i dont even need to flame him cause the kid's already Smoke! i bet he wrote his verse up nice and slow but overthunk it if he claims he's dope that's as real as a sober drunk kid homie - i'm accustomed to killing mics and stopping there but if you clean the mess i make of Smoke you might be mopping air my crops for share but Smoke is outta luck - his speech is wrong this battles gonna finish "Up In Smoke" like Cheech n Chong my reach is long yo - forever ballin' i dunk it when i'm on a beat i make it - your music's all in the trumpet quit stallin and flunk it like i predicted when the test was planned and stop 'jerkin around' homie or you'll never get an extra hand!
OK! so this is the verse i dropped second in the last tourney.... it was ment to be dropped first so thats why it started the way it did.... Different flow, and i highlighted the multies and italicized the less significant in-between rimes... so here it is: Yo! i aint waiting for you to go so that i can continue, i should just pin you, while i can, and rip the life from within you, despite your dim view, damn right i'll bring u, to the brink of death, and sit and watch every twitch thats left, and any spit your spitting is dripping from ur lips instead, kinda pink and red, cause its mixed with blood and that stink of dead, bodies, my hobbies, include, killing you rappers and robbing your food, im the only nigguh eating cause im frying this fool, your lying in pools, of empty gun clips and my cyanide drool, its a write or die duel, but i aint dieing, im writeing, and still flying, higher then Skies could even go, How The Fuck you think your gonna drive me in the flo(floor), all i need is a label to sign me and im ghost, but ill still pay homage to the time that you were choked, your rimes have been revoked, my lines have been presoaked, in gasoline and karosine, just to leave a scary scene, when fire comes flying, nigguh speak, are you daring me, your motherfucking rimes, are equal to parodies, meek and apparently, your seeking a fair releif, But i wont let you go easy so spare your free's (freestyles),
Thanks nigguh... But your Up In Smoke line did me dirty tho lol And actually i really liked that mopping air line lmao.... shit was dope!
damn this is a hard vote, you guys are pretty much bar for bar, attacking eachother at the same level, just different sets of vocabularies very nice indeed, haha damn this feels like world cup soccer live from the booth! sendin my vote up later...
Skies first 4 lines and ending got my vote. Both of em were pretty damn good though. would also like to thank smoke for doin a better job with fool/pool/drool than I had, thereby causing me to redo my 16. think it came out pretty well, time will tell.
yo kids votin for Smoke - post your explanations or you're not getting counted! i figured the bold voting rules right at the top of the thread would clue you in same with GrapDutch your vote doesnt count til you explain it homie
fuck it.. i may have to drop the explain your vote rule if this keeps happening and those kids dont hit this thread back up and explain
I'm gonna have to go with skies with this one, although they were both pretty damn good, I feel skies had better flow and the order of his was put together better. And for smoke, it was pretty good but I feel the flow was kinda choppy(maybe just the way I was reading it)). That's just my opinion. Thanks.
no disrespect to smoke cause that verse was fuckin dope but...skies punches were on point and his seemed to flow a lil better, def. a close ass vote but.. +1 for skies
I dont think Smoke shoulda dropped that verse again, he shoulda just went in i think... direct emotion of felt experience and all that jazz you digg i think theyre droppin two more tho, Smoke gotta bring the heat fire
haha, ok i digg that, but yea so anyways Skies got my vote for the superb smarts that he can lay on a verse, not too much to where its preachy and not dumbed down at all so strait up, its skies on this one, smoke is lookin like skies when he first got here no lie, lol def room for improvement
Both had fresh concepts. I like the bolding rhyme thing too, even though I prefer to put mine in "These". That being said. Smoke had a nice verse, great flow and decent punches, but Skies was on another level in this one. Kid can write.