VOTERS - READ THIS: ANYONE CAN VOTE, WITH THE EXCEPTION OF THE TWO BATTLERS. YOUR VOTE WILL ONLY BE COUNTED IF YOU POST A (BRIEF) EXPLANATION OF WHY YOU VOTED FOR THE VERSE YOU DID. the poll is designed to show who voted for who - so your poll vote will only be counted if you POST YOUR EXPLANATION. BATTLERS - READ THIS: verses should be 16 lines. no more no less. you guys got 24 hours to both check-in - and then 24 hours from when the second person checks in to drop your verse. VOTING CLOSED. Final count: 8-0 i win and proceed to round 2.
laxfeva22's verse: See I'm here to reveal n' report a few maligned rappers, They tryin to steal n' distort more'n two mis-assigned factors Takin aim at mr skin n' bones, go ‘head and blame it on the mic Tonal maimin with his ring tones, yeh he spittin lame squeaky bytes! Kid can't beat the bleak meek speak, my toungue leaks streaks of treat heat, Take a seat and eat that greek meat, this sonnin' tweeks freaks for street speak Slowly plantin doubt about who lookin stout, primo glides of that flexed sound Surely stampin clout, itsa route, been bookin out limo rides to the next round See this is all rather menial, practice time free throws on sweet flows, Caustic blather is remedial track this rhyme we know elite shows, Mystique grows quick around here, ya'll got the front row seat Critique blows, compounds fear of my next romp through the heat, Letcha resort to extortin, aint nuthin gonna keep ya from this hurtin, Gotcha cohorts for exportin, bluffin when ya say ya really out flirtin, See the fear in his eyes as he does realize I cut like a surgeon, This hear aint the only game where skies would be better as a virgin! \t\t _____________________________________________________________ ima drop my verse in a lil bit
lax duelin Skies is just pathetic to see.. nobodys better than me this 'battle's goin south' for lax like the confederacy! yo.... somebody gotta medic degree? i'm ill plus i shred up emcees.. cause i'm sick in the head thats why lax fled UpFromThe (the pronounced thee) he just aint sped up to speeds that i travel at.. i got the gavel lax! so it's judgment day for you when i drop the battle axe! so hot i flabbergast.. lax exaggerates.. that's why i call him a facts cleaver i'm bringin the 'heat off the dome'.. this kids just dull, he lax feva (lacks fever) last beaver he seen was exitin his mother's womb holmes.. he cant even 'fuck with pussies' n ima etch it in this brother's tombstone yo listen up.. im gittin tough.. since birth been impatient to target lax and after this sixteen, i leave this person as ancient as artifacts! man it's hard to rap.. this tourney? you shouldn't even be a part of that cause while youre busy tryna top me im achievin somethin art has lacked you aint even fuckin pardoned lax.. you're scarrin rap.. lets keep the bars in tact so that those guilty like yourself can stay behind em with your heart of black! edited for a couple typos gl in the polls homie
My vote is for upfromtheskies. That verse was ill, man. Lax's was alright, too... But his world play was kind of mediocre near the end.
i know he aint around much these days. im hopin he shows up. if not Herb just autos to round 2.. or technically i could see if starscream wanted to take joels place
Ok so he contradicted himself a bunch and really didn't use any punches, and when he did, they weren't to clever...especially that last one..It flowed kind of well...but weak overall when it comes to a "battle" verse you kinda over did it using lax man but it fit in, you kinda killed it with that first shit bout the confederacy line point is skies came rolling with punches, so he gets my vote lmfao I told you last night you stubborn bastard I vote Skies because he actually bused clever punches
yeah I noticed the overuse of it too, but your multi's made up for it along with the flow. both actually had a real nice flow to it but I feel like skies were better
Ima drop a line Just relax skies got lax fever, not another word either od'ing on lax and never took a breather holy shit, kinda drunk idk why I did that just pokin fun homie
yeah im surprised i didnt notice that shit myself before i dropped the verse. i coulda easily fixed it by changin the ones that werent a part of a rhyme into "him" or "kid" or "he" or whatever lol
reading both verses, i dont even understand how its a contest lol. lax is a dope verse, but skies is a mutherfucker with those metaphors
lax say the word and i'll close voting. you still got a shot at a miracle if you post this threads link to attract voters but for real good battle homie. you know what youre doin in terms of rhymeschemes. you just gotta give content more attention imo.. substitute some of the scheme complexity for it. its worth it.
Relax, I'm back lyrical battle axe to drop on lax for max ether idk just trying to still poke fun at skies for abusing lax