Todays Inspiration

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by Addicted, Dec 28, 2004.

  1. Well, today I feel inspired and wrote some poems.. With the aid of some chronic and malise

    Poser

    You pretend to be what you are not
    hung yourself, the rope is taut
    in these lies, these lies your caught
    with something you forgot.

    Time

    I know you as time knows clocks
    my heart beats like rhythmical seconds
    to measure you
    to measure time

    HATE

    Irritation fuels, faces paint
    more and more it feeds my hate
    sitting there so awkwardly
    finding flaws, more to hate
    as I sit here, here to wait
    I look around
    and it feels great
    I see your face, and feel this state
    a state of happiness and things are great

    .............

    Working progress to improve this one :(

    This is life, this is fate
    all these things are innate
    as I am, as I wait
    the world slows to relieve my hate
    silence grows in this abate
    ............... umm

    Yeah, that is about it! Love to get some of your input
     
  2. all i have to say is that is exactly what i was thinking..... also i love the way they all flow. :)
     

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