This is how you live your life, in this moment of bliss. Now. Now. Now. There is no other time that is certain. Only now, a minute forward you will be gone. Dead. But what will come of you the minute after that or are you even still with us in this world that cannot be transcended except to escape through the glory of death. Is the afterlife constant satisfaction? It must be better, I'm satisfied now. This moment of glory is forever as long as it is grasped. There is nothing for us to lose in this moment. So live it up as the world sees fit for we cannot be sure of anything but the eternal present. A God to us. Sometimes you just gotta write.
I liked it. if you cared to, you might dress it up a little. maybe some more similies or metaphors. maybe use some synonims(spelling sucks, I know) in place of overused word(s), ex... "moment". less pronouns is sometimes attractive as well. peace
Thanks bro. Normally I use much more flowery words. I wrote this VERY stoned so its a bit different from usual.