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Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by Malo, Mar 21, 2008.

  1. Photoshop pic. ill post some of my hand drawn stuff later. this is from a while back tell me what you think

    this is the original
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    this is after the editing
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    ima post all my drawings and poems here
    heres one i wrote

    my dreams

    my dreams
    they seem
    to run my mind
    im lost
    in thoughts
    that speak of what i want
    take no advice
    nonchalant
    to the world
    fuck it
    ill live it just fine
    and follow my dreams
    cuz ill make it
    take it
    hold it in my hand
    a show to the people
    who still think i cant
    ill make it to the top
    not gonna stop
    till the reaper make me drop
    my dream
    keeps telling me to reach
    hands to the sky
    feel the vibe
    when i speak these words
    will make you smile
    ill
    be fine with a nickel and a dime
    if you just listn to (my dreams)
    my songs
    my lyrics
    hear this
    ill make ya feel better
    under the weather?
    im shelter
    help ya
    save ya
    listen to my lips these words
    their 2 cents and (my dreams)


    this is another one, tell me what yall think on both

    Now see

    Now see
    these thoughts are pouring out my mouth
    and i keep sayin shit that makes the situation head down south
    now baby girl hear me out
    i was dazed and confused
    blew one of my fuse
    stupid
    i lose
    so baby dont make me choose
    because ill walk away as im singing the blues

    Now see
    i was trying to explain
    but i left because your tears brought me pain
    and im a man
    so ill stand
    and admit
    that i did shit with that chick
    not thinking
    living
    in the now
    and some how
    i ended up at her place
    i was so lost and drunk
    all i saw was your face
    and when you left i tried to replace
    everything you did for me
    you meant to me
    more then my heart
    becasue without my heart i cant live
    but without you i live
    with a guilt
    that spills
    baby she’ll
    never be what you were
    Toward her
    i dont feel love
    i just had lust
    and i bust
    my cards at 23
    and she had eyes on me
    ever sense she saw you leave

    Now see
    i didnt think that you would return
    so i wasnt concerned
    you fucked up
    you left
    i stepped back to my feet
    and she was there for me........

    wait

    wait

    please

    nevermind what i just said
    it was just rage
    cuz im like an animal
    locked in its cage
    to see you fade
    its hard on me
    im still stuck on these
    feelings that come up
    when i think of you
    and i think of you all the time
    im contemplating things like a mad man
    things a mad man would do
    so please pick up the phone?
    you home?
    dont lie because threw the curtains
    a mans siluet is shown
    fuck this im coming up
    your fucked
    and him too
    damn you
    see what you make me do
     
  2. unlike everything you've ever posted here, i like this.

    should you acquiesce, please post more.
     
  3. Yea ill post more.
    and i dont need to fight you on anything.
    I got nothing against you
     

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