The unofficial* poetry in motion thread

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by compton stomp, Apr 14, 2010.

  1. Theres a lady who seems so sure
    with eyes like a demon
    but a heart so pure
    she carries on through the motions and blurrs
    for she knows
    one day
    there will be potions and cures
    for all of her sins
    and until then
    she breathes
    and like a stallion she flees
    through the yonder and trees
    like a swift summers breeze
    til she falls to her knees
    she will carry on forever
    like the undaunted weather
    she will not slow
    for there is no barrier
    other than her own
     
  2. It was enter.......iding, enteriding, and it gave me a vision of a different kind of woman from a long time ago whose fate was so bleak. It was a positive experience. I need something else to use, like different sounds, just because many of our english words are so kiniving, like their and her and too, but many that we used have a strong identity, like the lady and the demon. Theres a good way to bring out the best of sounds and meanings. Is what I was trying to say. Gosh.
     
  3. One night is all you need

    Succeeding or bleeding it doesn’t make a difference

    At that moment you’re living an experience

    You can be listening or eating or maybe whistling and feeding

    You go to sleep while still in reality

    And your mind not in reality

    The glistening of the trees and of the music

    Together create a breeze of love for the moment

    I love these nights of magic

    The night in which there’s no static

    The night in which there’s no panic

    Feeling light your body is in a bubble

    These nights rarely turn into rubble

    Remember to stay out of trouble

    You’re alone

    No one to bug you or scream at you for not washing the dishes

    It’s only you and the music

    It’s only you and the trees

    It’s only you and the quietness

    Whatever it may be

    You have to savor these nights in which are not meant to be

    And when these nights come to an end

    Just lay down and start all over again
     

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