Alright when I spit this shit my OG went fuckin nuts, but my brother has always told me I suck at rappin. I got mixed reviews I wanna hear what yall think. If anyone knows anything about rappin it would be cool if you could teach me how to put this to music. Shit don't really mix with any beats I'm finding but it's probably beceause I'm doin somethin wrong. Here goes. This ones for Zack, always had my back but morals one thing he lack. One day he snorted some blues, since then his minds been on a cruise. Hit our first lick together, could have gotten rich together. Made $150 but we could have got life, should have seen them bitches face when I pulled out the knife. Now he's in prison for the second time, it kills me to know that's why I made up this rhyme. Partners in crime, yeah we chilled all the time, a brother like no other when we smokin the dime. I bet if blues hadnt taken over your head you'de prolly have a girl in your bed, gettin some head, makin click clack with they were dead. This ones for everyone who's got a homie in prison, I wish god would come down and give the judge and exorcism. This ones for everyone who'se got a homie in jail, I wish the devil would come up and just raise hell. This ones for everyone who's turned the court house into a mass murder sequel. Your homies shoot targets my homies shoot people. Yeah Sam and Britney were wack, but if it weren't for them I wouldn't have my good homie Zack. If it weren't for them we wouldn't be smokin a black, sippin on yack, makin suburb thugs catch a heart attack. All them fake fucks tellin me your smokin crack, all they deserve is a back hand smack. Yeah you crazy, but crazys just a part of bein real. So what if you wanna whoop someone to get a half assed thrill. So what if you wanna snort up a pill, jack a hundred dollar bill, maybe today that's just how you feel. I'm sick of all these motherfuckers tellin me lies, I know they'll never say it to your face, I bet they got only one ball in between their thys. It really makes me laugh me laugh to hear their replies when I say would you say that out loud if Zack wasn't inside? This ones for everyone who's got a homie in prison, I wish god would come down and give the judge and exorcism. This ones for everyone who'se got a homie in jail, I wish the devil would come up and just raise hell. This ones for everyone who's turned the court house into a mass murder sequel. Your homies shoot targets my homies shoot people.
i like it dude it feels straight from the heart +rep especially if its a true story but rapping ability is 99% flow, 1% lyrics thats just how the game is
if u really got ability u got both. for example right here u got a full story with some nice flow [ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iF_f5hmcZQE]YouTube - Souls Of Mischief - Anything Can Happen[/ame]
Didn't read it...but you have the most ignorant and disrespectful name I've seen in a while. Identifying yourself with him in any way, good or bad, is a disgrace to greatest hip hop artist who ever lived. Grow up g
lol, maybe a stretch, but you'd have a hard time creating a large fanbase in a rap career with it haha. On the raps id say they're alright (don't stand out to me, which if it is just text i guess it has to coz u have no flow to back it up) One thing id say is u seem to switch rhyme one rhyme too early imo. Hard to tell without a flow though. Shmerf.