Stream of Consciousness

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by J Dylan, Mar 5, 2019.

  1. we're living in a bastardization of a false advertised nation
    selling the concept of advancing your placement
    while puttin clamps on your progress to pacify greatness
    who are they to ask for my patience when theyre actually aimless?
    I keep the tree lit while I examine this flagrance
    sample the fragrance that pushes a simpleton to a mastermind basis
    got the gall to ask if I'm wasted? shit, I'm half the time weightless
    brash but not brainless cause I'm mad and I'm ragin
    glad I'm caucasian cause all these police only teach you to practice evasion
    they got the high beams aimed on the kid with the sign that says "I NEED CHANGE
    FROM SOCIETYS GAMES"
    that's why I breathe flames on the lines of these pages and time just hangs
    freezes, stops-- read your clocks closely cause between those seconds is where demons walk
    So if you wanna witness let the needle drop
     
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  2. :rave-girl:

    :love-m3j:
     
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  3. Yeah, we'd like to hear this once its recorded :pimp:
     
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  4. of course! I’ll post two more verses in here over the course of the next day or two and then record the whole thing on wed or thurs just for you guys
     
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  5. 20190304_210705-1.jpg

    This is me "cheerz'n" to that.

    Yeah, I'm pretending that's a word :pimp:
     
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  6. I went to cheerz back and found a sad situation that I gotta fix
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  7. also

    WHERE DA PURPZ AT
     
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  8. 2nded.
     
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  9. It's almost gone! I've been hoarding the little I had left. Well. Until I stopped after work and got more :roflmao:
     
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  10. they feed you outright lies and expect you not to see it like you got no eyes
    and it baffles you when half the population doesnt ostracize
    but thats just how life flies.... aint shit make sense it’s just drama and dumb shit
    got me keepin the blunt lit just to settle my stomach
    from all of this ruckus, fuck ittttt, I hate political function
    maybe I should run for office but I aint fit for corruption
    yall sober mothafuckas need to consider consumption
    to help your blind ass see we’re on the brink of eruption
    me? I’m stayin bent and I wont blink even once
    all my friends countin pennies just to see what they can spend
    and what a hand college education’s lent
    helpin people stay in debt and scrape for cents
    my homie paid 80 fuckin grand just to make his rent
    this shit is like a good ass joke if you overlook the fact that theyre as good as broke
    hardly a difference anymore between a fuckin doctor and some hood ass folk
    maaaan it really is a good ass joke
     
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  11. see, like I don't really like this verse for instance. prolly wont use it for anything.
     
  12. I spend at least half my time gettin half closed eyes
    but it ironically makes me less blind, opens the mind
    and illuminates what had been tryin to hide
    and sometimes it aint even somethin you been tryin to find
    I'm high as a kite cause I'm blowin the trees so I float on the breeze
    as it blows thru the leaves and I flow on the beat
    a dynamic meeting of nature and beast,
    I'm learnin to teach, and I teach to unlearn
    this paradoxical life just makes me freeze as I burn
    we find pleasure in pain and we unleash and return
    and seek relief in a surge of releasin perversion
    and seethe as we yearn, I'm just a human bein a person,
    we're all fucked up from the fear of desertion
    cause we've all lost somethin that was dear to our searchin
    for happiness, and if you ask me if we'll ever find it
    I would have to answer with this lyrical sermon
     
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  13. now that I like
     
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  14. #14 J Dylan, Mar 6, 2019
    Last edited: Mar 6, 2019
    @HIGHliketheSKY @dementiax @flooyeezy

    got a preliminary recording done. not sure if I'll keep it to this beat or switch it up and got some little tweaks to make but figured I'd share. troll song title. :laughing:
     
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  15. Lmao@the title


    spend at least half my time gettin half closed eyes
    but it ironically makes me less blind, opens the mind
    and illuminates what had been tryin to hide
    and sometimes it aint even somethin you been tryin to find

    This
     
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  16. thanks bro! stay tuned for more. I'll tag you in the future if ya want. and ah shit I gotta tag @HashnWeed666 and @Dizzy too
     
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  17. This ended up a lot better than I had expected, kudos Nach
    :judgekneel:
    I especially enjoyed your being a scatman at the end
     
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  18. thankyou for your vote of confidence, Soozy. :laughing:
     
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  19. my mullet lulled you into thinking I couldnt rap, didnt it.
     
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