Cranberry Lemonade by Airsick on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free Sometime during the song you can hear my phone vibrate i'm using a built in laptop mic thats pretty shitty so bear with me open to opinions and would appreciate them P.S. Just for fun, this wasn't serious like going all out lyrical shit
I couldnt hear your voice that well, prolly cause of the mic issue. But one thing i can tell is that u really need to work on your flow. You should buy a decent mic and then spit so we can hear u better.
Lmao OMG....yes dude work on your flow!! You sound like a "white boy trying to rap." Nice beat though!
Be yourself and never be serious Thats all there is to it And never speak a word of English but know the language more than Shakespeare Thats all. Good luck bro!
Sorry, I'm being mean. But that had me fucking laughing my ass off... I've listened to it a few times Laugh every time... Sorry man. Why not rap about other shit besides cars, bitches and clothes? Very original. Trying to sound hard. Decompossed bodies in the limo-zine Something about, after that she looses her-life
Well I first used this beat as a parody between me and some friends, and some of the funny parts are infused in there. I ended up fixing up the verses and re-writing a lot of it. I am a white boy trying to rap, I was trying to keep up with the goddamn Gucci Mane beat lol
ive been rappin for a while and the best way to work on gettin your flow better is to rap on your webcam and watch it after. also freestyling with friends helps. i always have a freestyle session everytime me and the homies toke.
You've got a lot of work to do man :/ Nice choice in beat though. OFWGKTA used it in Orange Juice and murdered it. Lemonade is the only song I'll give gucci mane props too. Keep practicing
Haha I thought you guys would catch the joke hence the whole "Antartica swag in the house, blowin dro lift her blouse fuckin hoe steal her couch" that shit had me and a friend laughing
Tips: If you're doing instrumentals from rappers don't steal there flow.Don't write to there flow either.So many people do that. Raps don't have to rhymes. If your serious learn about poetry.Simple things like you can rhyme ABCB it doesn't have to be every bar rhyming with the one before it or even every other one. Listen to kid cudi for examples.The song "Alive": I watch the sun collapse and toke up in the clizzoud I am the lone wolf go where I wanna Let the moon shine be the guide to the lizzight even when I stray away the light never left me, uh I learn to follow my instinct Talk about the light, rather that than the evil Fill another place in a room full of people Try and be the same bitch you know you're not a sequel
Also remember that it is about having fun.For me at least. I never take myself to seriously.I could go on and on with tips but a few more is make sure your vocabulary is strong,Rap about what you know,Rap with friends. I have this friend who I always collab with.He doesn't rap much anymore but we started out together and I always drop hot shit when he's around.Plus he's honest.If something sounds like shit he will tell me.
To be honest I didn't even listen to what you linked.Heres a few songs I think you should try on though:718-fannypack, catch the beat-Chip Tha Ripper, Christian dior demin flow-Kayne west, Wild'n cause im young-Kid Cudi. Those are all good beats to flow on.The first two I haven't found instrumentals for though.I just did it by memory when I went on them.
Actually I forgot catch the beat is also the zoo by lil wayne so there should be an instrumental for it.