Witness the hopelessness Its all around you Hopelessness...The only promise kept to me Emptiness fills the endless Endless...Pain continuing Living in a black and white world Solid Grey Closer and closer to shame you put upon my chest Its caving in, crushing the feeling away Fuck the popularity, everyone is so fake Pointless is my method Accusations laid upon me I see only salvation but welcome the evil a faint sound in this scattered existence In a void of space Im never alone your never alone lets die together my sweet demoness What do you think? i think its kinda bad
It's a little too angsty for me, but I mean that's just you. As with most stuff I read on here it's hard to find one direct theme or message, and lyrically it's a bit stumbly. Not that bad though.
I'll second that emotion. For a stoner forum, the poetry and songwriting is all very dark and disturbed. I guess I'll break that cycle by posting a song of mine (chords included) G The sun rains down on an August day C.......................G There's green all around Am There's a light dew on the grass below .......G.............C........G Like diamonds on the ground G Going where the pavement ends C..............................G Not a street sign to be found Am Willow trees blowing in the breeze ........G..........C..........G Look out, I'm country-bound G So catch that highway north, baby C....................................G Come with me I'm leaving town Am Leave your phone on the bedside stand .........G....................C.............G Don't want nothing to weigh you down (copyright 2007 A.J.H.)