Song I wrote

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by BCRazzle, Oct 15, 2006.

  1. Let me know what you guys think of it

    "Home"

    It all started when I was just a little kid
    You wanna try explaining all the shit that you did?
    What you made me think, what you told me was right?
    Everything you told me fell apart that night

    So here I sit pencil in hand, tears in my eyes
    Wishing everything around me would just fall down and die

    But I struggle for truth in this life that I live
    Not knowin who to believe or what to forget
    Everything I want hidden in a dream
    But dreams are just dreams and thats all theyll ever be
    Another Hope in life is all I'll ever need

    So here is my message, my message to you
    When everything around you just turns to shit
    And you Just wanna end it all and fucking call it quits

    Remember theres an end to all of this fright
    Secluded in a place that sees no light
    A place where dead men roam where the devil fights!
    Bums hand out life with all of their might
    Cold air bites you but you have no sight
    You're robbed of everything you had including what's right

    Just remember theres a place, a place you can go
    Where your accepted no matter what, home. \t\t \t \t\t \t\t \t\t \t\t \t\t \t \t\t \t\t\t \t\t\t[​IMG][​IMG][​IMG][​IMG]
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  2. this is a rap song right? i'm not exactly sure but by the way you rhyme that's my impression :smoking:
     
  3. seems like the "fort minor" type of song. i like it
     
  4. its pretty cool
     
  5. ya its kinda a rap/rock song. Like the lyrics are rapped but the music is actually made not produced.
     
  6. very good i like your thoughts and creativity
     

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