Something I'm Working On

Discussion in 'The Musician in U' started by Baek215, Oct 21, 2012.

  1. No title yet, bored at work and came with a few lines. I used Theraflu instrumental - Kanye West to write this to.

    Tell me why society tries to fit the social norm
    preachin everyone's opinion but afraid to say our own
    blindly following like sheep religous people fighting wars
    we're blinded by the truth your shepards never coming home

    (can't really find a way to bridge these together so it'll prob be the second verse, not done witht the first)

    as technology gets better we get dumber everyday
    spoiled by convenience is that the price we have to pay


    all I have so far, any critisism is welcome.
     
  2. I dig it. I don't know the timing or flow, but it reads well. Finish 'er up and let us listen!
     

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