Mostly to annoy the teacher. Cypher Ring around the Rosy's Ran off with the spoon… -Shut up the fiddle, enough with the moos A rude awakening... The banging rattles my noggin, I sit erect. -really? -GET UP!!! I trudge out of my night time cocoon, the sweet nectar of rest hanging in my voice, my eyes... I can still hear the damn pounding. No hot water... my poor testicles. I soap, I rinse, I repeat. Don't forget to wash behind your ears. Why the is the towel wet...? I exit stage left, as my scrotum finally liberates my testicles. Breakfast... maybe later. Rain fall, I fall… Cradle and all... Im pretty critical of my writing, people always say it's good though, but idk, can I have y'alls opinions/critiques?
I really like it. To me it appears somewhat absurdist/abstract, and I like that. You should write more like it.
Yes! "Grasscity says i need more letters.... SO THERE YOU GO GRASSCITY DOT COM. MORE FUCKING LETTERS. YOU HAPPY?"