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somethin i came up with just now

Discussion in 'Music genres, Bands and Artists' started by deezy, Aug 1, 2008.

  1. my flow blows up like just like a hand grenade
    dissipate ya mental state like crack cocaine
    these times today, man these times is strange
    most these motherfuckers all actin fake
    talkin bout wheres the cake? but lemme get a piece of my pie
    so i can nourish my minds eye, flourish and rhyme tight
    youre tourists and im the guide, so follow me as i take you on a ride through my mind
    ever since the age of 9 ive been terrified of life scared that i just might
    not reach my expectations and elevate to a higher mental state
    constant frustration so i grab this mic
    and i grab this pen and i begin to write and develope the rhyme
    and it seems that i'm just fine but nothin is what it seems now tell me that i aint lyin
    my momma cryin cuz she knows im in trouble and i guess its just part of the struggle
    to gain balance which is hard to find in this life of mine
    so i look up to the sky and ask god why we live in pain
    he looked back down and said just play the game
    and that really hit me hard cuz i realized im the only motherfucker thats livin my life
    im the only motherfucker thats even alive cuz all you motherfuckers aint livin it right
     
  2. thanks brah. i havent written in a while need to get back into it.
     
  3. word man. power.

    you should do the rap battle thread man!
     
  4. thanks guy. i would join the battle thread but im not really a battle rapper, i like to write it as poetry at first then evolve it. prolly add some more to it soon when i get some inspiration (im rusty).
     

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