Some poems I wrote while stoned

Discussion in 'The Artist's Corner' started by weedfuckhead, Jun 22, 2010.

  1. Okay, so I like writing poetry and I'm a very gifted writer, especially at my young age. I've been told by many people that I'm a brilliant writer, so I decided to give it a shot while high. A lot of these ideas sounded much better at the time, but nonetheless, I wanna know if I should throw these out or keep 'em. Thanks GC! :smoke:

    One time I tried getting high
    and it
    changed things--
    which substance is it that does not?
    Dad in the next room I hoped did not know
    I was chewing his tobacco
    and the fireflies were jumping & sparking across the street
    over the rooftop
    just twice
    one of those tobacco-guys told me
    anything could get me high
    if mixed with tobacco
    What to think of you, sir, in America?
    America with indictments shooting out from the pinball machine?
    America with snobby prep girls & iPods that don't autospell profanitites?
    America with limited space in the cities & immigration crises in the southwest?
    America with isolation for the hillgangs & media coverage & encouragement for the streetgangs?
    America with grocerystore moms who'll kill the lucrative users & bonfire dads
    who'll shoot the lucrative users?
    And what sir, of the lucrative users?
    May they not experience the beauty they seek as part of their Freedom Regimen,
    outside Boston where the massacre was
    or in the modern streets of New York?
    America where it's 79 outisde and 72 inside?
    America where the cat just climbed out the window?
    Sir, I know you'll only agree with me
    After all, I'm just an alien you know from
    ...somewhere
    Recognizing my green distorted features as part of your own in the mirror
    I see you now, sir
    Shaving to get rid of the alien stubble
    That keeps creeping all night
    To have overcome your face in the morning
    I see you
    I hope you'll reconsider things...
    Goodnight

    How can I not laugh at the policy?
    George Bush telling me all about oil
    And nothing of marijuana
    And telling me all about killing Muslims and nothing of non-violent technologies
    And telling me all about safe sex and nothing about abortions & nothing about bondage
    and telling me all about cereal and nothing about obesity
    And telling me nothing of drugs and nothing of rehab and nothing of chemistry
    but only about preconceived orientations
    And telling me nothing of faith and telling me everything about God
    And telling me nothing of aliens
    And telling me nothing of illegal aliens
    And telling me all about war and nothing of Gandhi
    and telling me all about Laura and nothing of Monica
    And telling me all about Shakespeare and nothing of Ginsberg
    And telling me all about calling and nothing of texting
    And telling me all about hard drives and nothing of pornography
    And telling me all about criticism and nothing of the Bill of Rights
    That's what the fuck I said..blacklist me
     
  2. Woah dude. A unique set of poems indeed. I enjoyed reading =)
     
  3. Thanks man. I appreciate the feedback. :)
     
  4. when i opened this thread it reminded me one time me and rob wer blowed, he begins to tell me he is a freaking poet and how his ideas flow better when he is high, he says he hates writing, but tht he should be a poet because he is so brilliant lol

    anyways, tbh, i ddnt like the first one because i ddnt get it :confused:, but i liked the second one a lot :)
     

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