Okay, so I like writing poetry and I'm a very gifted writer, especially at my young age. I've been told by many people that I'm a brilliant writer, so I decided to give it a shot while high. A lot of these ideas sounded much better at the time, but nonetheless, I wanna know if I should throw these out or keep 'em. Thanks GC! One time I tried getting high and it changed things-- which substance is it that does not? Dad in the next room I hoped did not know I was chewing his tobacco and the fireflies were jumping & sparking across the street over the rooftop just twice one of those tobacco-guys told me anything could get me high if mixed with tobacco What to think of you, sir, in America? America with indictments shooting out from the pinball machine? America with snobby prep girls & iPods that don't autospell profanitites? America with limited space in the cities & immigration crises in the southwest? America with isolation for the hillgangs & media coverage & encouragement for the streetgangs? America with grocerystore moms who'll kill the lucrative users & bonfire dads who'll shoot the lucrative users? And what sir, of the lucrative users? May they not experience the beauty they seek as part of their Freedom Regimen, outside Boston where the massacre was or in the modern streets of New York? America where it's 79 outisde and 72 inside? America where the cat just climbed out the window? Sir, I know you'll only agree with me After all, I'm just an alien you know from ...somewhere Recognizing my green distorted features as part of your own in the mirror I see you now, sir Shaving to get rid of the alien stubble That keeps creeping all night To have overcome your face in the morning I see you I hope you'll reconsider things... Goodnight How can I not laugh at the policy? George Bush telling me all about oil And nothing of marijuana And telling me all about killing Muslims and nothing of non-violent technologies And telling me all about safe sex and nothing about abortions & nothing about bondage and telling me all about cereal and nothing about obesity And telling me nothing of drugs and nothing of rehab and nothing of chemistry but only about preconceived orientations And telling me nothing of faith and telling me everything about God And telling me nothing of aliens And telling me nothing of illegal aliens And telling me all about war and nothing of Gandhi and telling me all about Laura and nothing of Monica And telling me all about Shakespeare and nothing of Ginsberg And telling me all about calling and nothing of texting And telling me all about hard drives and nothing of pornography And telling me all about criticism and nothing of the Bill of Rights That's what the fuck I said..blacklist me
when i opened this thread it reminded me one time me and rob wer blowed, he begins to tell me he is a freaking poet and how his ideas flow better when he is high, he says he hates writing, but tht he should be a poet because he is so brilliant lol anyways, tbh, i ddnt like the first one because i ddnt get it , but i liked the second one a lot